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week 5/ Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article/ Amandaerfeng

Here is the link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Boston_Terrier&diff=prev&oldid=982847591 This time I chose Boston terrier as my topic since I have one at home. I spent too much time finding a useful link for the article, but end up reuse the reference the article has since it missed some information.Amandaerfeng (talk) 18:59, 10 October 2020 (UTC)

Amandaerfeng, I agree with the revert on this, as Instagram is not a reliable source for Wikipedia https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:External_links/Perennial_websites. Can you re-add one to this article or to another one and then ping me again here? FULBERT (talk) 18:14, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
@FULBERT:Here is the new changes I made with a new reference.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Boston_Terrier&diff=prev&oldid=983181686 Thank you.Amandaerfeng (talk) 18:56, 12 October 2020 (UTC)
Amandaerfeng Please remember to include colons for indents; I fixed them here already. This addition was shorter than I want to see moving forward, but ok for now. Current. --FULBERT (talk) 18:11, 17 October 2020 (UTC)

Week 5 / Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article / CaptainJoseph

I chose Determinism as my article this week. I provide an extra reference to this article and point out Determinism is about interaction which affect our cognitive processes in our life. Here is the difference between the previous version and the current one.

During this week assignment, I learned how to provide more information without my own bias. CaptainJoseph (talk) 19:04, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

CaptainJoseph, Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:57, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

@FULBERT: I have done that, thank you professor! CaptainJoseph (talk) 19:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

CaptainJoseph, Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 19:08, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

@FULBERT: Sorry for my misunderstanding. CaptainJoseph (talk) 19:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

CaptainJoseph, OK, signed now fine, though I do not understand what you mean in your add on the article, "Determinism is about interaction which affect our cognitive processes in our life." Can you explain that a bit? It is not quite clear to me. The source itself is ok, this is only about what you meant. FULBERT (talk) 19:19, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

@FULBERT: Sure professor. It basically means that Determinism is about the cause and the result of what we have done in our life. Cause and result are always bounded together in our cognitive processes, so if we have sufficient information about a object we might predict every move of that object including human being. That is just A point of view of Determinism. CaptainJoseph (talk) 19:31, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

CaptainJoseph, This would have been a helpful add to the article itself near your statement. FULBERT (talk) 19:19, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

@FULBERT: Allright! I have done that in the article! Here is the link! CaptainJoseph (talk) 20:58, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

CaptainJoseph, Please remember to indent your replies with one colon " : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 22:08, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
@FULBERT: Thanks for mention this, professor! CaptainJoseph (talk) 22:12, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
CaptainJoseph, OK for now. Current. FULBERT (talk) 18:14, 17 October 2020 (UTC)

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Week 2 / Evaluate Article / Nectaros

In this section, I completed an evaluation of Augmented Reality article, here: Augmented Reality. I noted that the Possible Applications section could be expanded and that the Privacy Concerns citation could use more citations. I left some feedback on the article's Talk page. Diff link is here: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Augmented_reality&curid=231173&diff=982977172&oldid=982971858. In this section, I learned how to insert links and leave feedback. I am still figuring out the headers on Talk pages to leave feedback.

Nectaros (talk) 19:46, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

FULBERT

(testing signature and pinging)

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Nectaros (talk • contribs) 14:42, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

Nectaros, Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:35, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
Nectaros, This was still not signed, but ok for now. Current. FULBERT (talk) 18:23, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

Week 3 / Copyedit an Article / Nectaros

For this section, I added a citation and copyedited a sentence for word choice in Virtual reality therapy. The link to the diff is https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Virtual_reality_therapy&type=revision&diff=982988347&oldid=981561301

I learned how adding a citation in the source code automatically adds the source in the references below on an article. I learned how to make small copyedits for work choice and typos.

Nectaros (talk) 16:02, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

Nectaros, The link does not work; please fix it and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 18:35, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
@FULBERT: New link to diff:

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Virtual_reality_therapy&type=revision&diff=982988347&oldid=981561301 Nectaros (talk) 19:50, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

Nectaros, Please remember to indent your replies with one colon " : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 19:26, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
@FULBERT:: New link to diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Virtual_reality_therapy&type=revision&diff=982988347&oldid=981561301 Nectaros (talk) 22:39, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
Nectaros, Nice edit. Current. FULBERT (talk) 18:25, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

Week 4 / Add a Citation to One Article / Nectaros

I added a citation to Commercial Augmented Reality in the summary for dressing room applications. Diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Commercial_augmented_reality&type=revision&diff=983003216&oldid=921537030. I learned about manual insertion of citations, since the source would not auto-populate. Nectaros (talk) 17:40, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

Nectaros, The link does not work; please fix it and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 18:36, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT New diff link here: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Commercial_augmented_reality&type=revision&diff=983003216&oldid=921537030

Nectaros (talk) 19:52, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

Nectaros, Please remember to indent your replies with one colon " : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Please indent these replies accordingly and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 19:27, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT New diff link here: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Commercial_augmented_reality&type=revision&diff=983003216&oldid=921537030 Nectaros (talk) 22:40, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
Nectaros, Good addition. Current. FULBERT (talk) 18:25, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

Week 5 / Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article / Muzizimu

I added a citation to the article called "Bee hummingbird" to better understand which area do bee hummingbird likes to stay. Here is the difference link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.phptitle=Bee_hummingbird&type=revision&diff=982853910&oldid=982809972 After week5, I had a deeper understanding of how to cite a source and how to explain a topic in details in order to make articles from Wiki more useful.Muzizimu (talk) 19:38, 10 October 2020 (UTC)

Muzizimu, The link to your diff did not work. Please fix and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 18:31, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT, sorry about that, please check the link again: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bee_hummingbird&type=revision&diff=982853910&oldid=982809972, thank you!
Muzizimu, Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 00:10, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT, sorry about that, please check the link again: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bee_hummingbird&type=revision&diff=982853910&oldid=982809972, thank you!Muzizimu (talk) 08:04, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
Muzizimu, Your edit was reverted by another editor. Give me an explanation of how you understood their comment and your thoughts on it. Please ensure to indent this via using multiple " : " symbols. FULBERT (talk) 19:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT, the editor said that this article is not about this species but about the tribe Mellisugini, they don't have the article yet which really confuse me. And the editor think the habitat I introduce doesn't belong to lede, I think it does, because this is a brief introduction and will be explained in later paragraphs.Muzizimu (talk) 23:46, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
Muzizimu, Good points all, and good enough for now. Current. FULBERT (talk) 18:27, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

Week6 / Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article / 燕京赵大知识分子

This week I added a citation to an article that talks about Taoism. The citation itself can give the reader a better first glance of the history and concepts behind Taoism before any deep dive into the studies themselves, so readers will note the difference compared with Confucianism from a very basic standpoint. Here is the difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Taoism&type=revision&diff=983763890&oldid=983676700 Here is the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Taoism 燕京赵大知识分子 (talk) 03:21, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

燕京赵大知识分子, Nice add. Current. FULBERT (talk) 18:33, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

Week 5 / Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article / ShawnBoom

The article I chose this week is "Liopleurodon", this is my favorite see-creature belong to prehistoric time. I notice that the couple definitions are not so clear if the readers not familiar with those creatures. So I just make a citation to help easy to understand. Here is the difference-link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Liopleurodon&type=revision&diff=982919961&oldid=982859273 --ShawnBoom (talk) 05:25, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

ShawnBoom, See the revert comment another editor made. Find and use a reliable source for this and re-ping me here. FULBERT (talk) 18:51, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for your comment professor, I already replaced a new resource. Here is a new difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Liopleurodon&diff=982919961&oldid=982859273 Please check it and let me know what you think, thank you.--ShawnBoom (talk) 20:29, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
ShawnBoom, Please remember to indent your replies with one colon " : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Please indent these replies accordingly and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 19:30, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for your comment Professor, I already indent my replies. Thank you.--ShawnBoom (talk) 15:18, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
ShawnBoom, This is fine for now, but I recommend using higher-level sources to cite articles in Wikipedia; stay away from using encyclopedias and focus more on journal articles or the like. Current. FULBERT (talk) 18:43, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

Week 4/Add a Citation to One Article/DetongChe

I have a Miniature Schnauzer, so I search this article (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Miniature_Schnauzer) and I have never heard about "UK Kennel Club". Then I added a citation to this article (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Kennel_Club) under the health part. Hope this citation help more people have a good understanding. This link shows the difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Miniature_Schnauzer&type=revision&diff=982907866&oldid=982712683. Since not all people know and understand your article's reference, a citation is very important for the reviewer to understand the article and your idea. DetongChe (talk) 03:14, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

DetongChe, Avoid using Wikipedia as a source for itself per WP:NOTSOURCE. Cite external, reliable sources as evidence to support your claims per WP:VERIFY. Replace the source you used with one that is more reliable, and ping me here to review it. FULBERT (talk) 18:44, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
@FULBERT:Since Miniature Schnauzer looks good, so I choose another one. This is the article link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kaws. Kaws is Brian Donnelly's design. In the article "Products and commercial collaborations" part, it is a missed citation of "Medicom Toy". So I add a citation which is Medicom Toy's office website: http://www.medicomtoy.co.jp/information/. Here's the link that shows the difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Kaws&type=revision&diff=983858263&oldid=981786500. Thank you. DetongChe (talk) 17:34, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
DetongChe, I am not sure about this one, but will leave it for the community to decide. Current. FULBERT (talk) 20:21, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

Week6 / Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article / ywrhea

1. This week I assign myself an article named Social identity theory. The summary of this article is: Tajfel et al. conducted studies to minimal criteria to develop ingroup bias and discrimination. They found that social categorization per se is a sufficient condition to develop intergroup bias, without pre-existing hostility or resourece for competition between groups. I add a description to the previous version, which make the definition more accurate. Besides, the previous version does not have reference, so I insert a reference to make it more convincing and persuasive.

2. The link to the difference is https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/983952173

3. From Wikipedia’s article, I learn lots of useful contents. By editing the article and add citation to it, I’m glad I can make the information on Wikipedia more useful and related, and provide more details to the readers. Ywrhea (talk) 07:52, 17 October 2020 (UTC) Ywrhea (talk) 07:51, 17 October 2020 (UTC)

Ywrhea, Please add more text as needed next time. OK for now. Current. FULBERT (talk) 20:37, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

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Week6 / Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article / JS11323

I selected and assigned myself to another article called "Eason Chan", who is my favorite singer in China. He has been one of China's best-selling artists since 2000 and has won many prestigious awards. Here is the link of the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eason_Chan. Here is the difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Eason_Chan&diff=984038552&oldid=977619244. In this week, I am more proficient in how to add citations in an article, that is so helpful for me. --Js11323 (talk) 20:03, 17 October 2020 (UTC)

Js11323, Nice edit. Current. FULBERT (talk) 14:13, 19 October 2020 (UTC)

Week6 / Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article / ASCXX

1. Here is the article for this week, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hunger_marketing#Emotional_decision_making

2. Here is the change I made, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Hunger_marketing&diff=984083705&oldid=928129560

3. This week, I edited an article called "Hunger Marketing". It is a relatively new topic in marketing, and hence it needs more information. I edited part of "emotional decision making" by pointing out that it is essentially equivalent to intuitive decision making. I learned the importance of keep correcting Wiki articles because a non-popular article like this one I edited definitely needs more improvement. --ASCXX (talk) 02:31, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

ASCXX, Nice edit. Current. FULBERT (talk) 14:17, 19 October 2020 (UTC)

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Week6 / Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article / Muzizimu

I added a sentence to the article called "Geography of Bolivia" under the climate section to point out that temperature and surface elevation is closely related. The link to diff is :https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Geography_of_Bolivia&type=revision&diff=984088184&oldid=976429094 I learned that each sentence or word you put on wikipedia should be readable and related to the article.Muzizimu (talk) 02:55, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

Muzizimu, Nice edit. Current. FULBERT (talk) 14:19, 19 October 2020 (UTC)

Week6 / Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article / Lipute17

I added more information to the article "Silvano Arieti" about his personal contribution in psychology. the diff link is: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Silvano_Arieti&diff=984203823&oldid=958638470. I think the editing on wiki also is a good opportunity for us to encounter new knowledge.Lipute17 (talk) 20:21, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

Lipute17, I do not think this is a particularly strong citation you added, and I think some of your language was a bit extreme, but good enough to allow another editor to revise if others think the same. Current. FULBERT (talk) 14:22, 19 October 2020 (UTC)

Week6 / Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article / 八路军被服厂李厂长

This week, I've assigned myself an article about Apple Inc, and adding one paragraph in the section of Energy and resources. Here is the link of the difference https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Apple_Inc.&type=revision&diff=983872590&oldid=983766237 I added a paragraph on about how the Apple's next 10-years-plan of being com·plete·lycarbon neutral in 2030, and then I provided what series of innovative actions that Apple is taking to lower emissions. Another good new for this time assignment is that the first time somebody else thanked to my edit and fix couple words in my edit. I feel great this time. Also what I learned from this week is that the wikipedia articles should be time sensitive, and adding updates. It is not a one-time project.--八路军被服厂李厂长 (talk) 23:11, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

八路军被服厂李厂长, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 20:28, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT, I assigned this article, and I don't know why it can't appear to you. Here is the link for the article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Apple_Inc.#Energy_and_resources--八路军被服厂李厂长 (talk) 20:38, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
八路军被服厂李厂长, I see it there now. Interesting edit to a well-watched article. Current. FULBERT (talk) 14:26, 19 October 2020 (UTC)

Week6/ Citation/ Mavin2516

I worked on an article titled business administration that described the overall management and administration of an organization. I added some information on the article regarding the Henri Fayol's five functions of management and cited the references. Here is the link to the original article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business_administration?veaction=edit and here is the edit version https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business_administrationMavin2516 (talk) 21:21, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

Mavin2516, Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 14:36, 19 October 2020 (UTC)

Week6 / Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article / ShawnBoom

The article I chose this week is "Online shopping". The weather in NY becomes much colder today that reminds me it's might be the time to buy a winter sweater or jacket. So I just start online shopping before I searched for this article. I want to know more myself as a customer. And what I cited this time is just providing a couple more points to help the author have a better statement. The difference link is https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Online_shopping&type=revision&diff=983877068&oldid=978355176 --ShawnBoom (talk) 19:57, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

ShawnBoom, Interesting add. Current. FULBERT (talk) 15:27, 19 October 2020 (UTC)

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Week6 / Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article / CaptainJoseph

Hi! During this week I edited the article League of Legends, for citation this week, I find that the article itself didn't mention that League of Legends's mobile game. So for this gap between the knowledge of this article I cite that the mobile game of LoL is launching its open beta test on October 27, 2020 to fill this gap. Here is difference link for that. In this week's exercise, I learned how to apply my exist knowledge to an article and find relevant references. Thank you very much CaptainJoseph (talk) 22:44, 17 October 2020 (UTC)

CaptainJoseph, Interesting edit, and I hope you noticed how many other editors improved upon your work as a next step. I hope you are watching that article, as you would have then seen that. Current. FULBERT (talk) 14:15, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
@FULBERT:Sure professor, I saw that, Thanks for mention that. CaptainJoseph (talk) 16:55, 19 October 2020 (UTC)

Week 7/ Contribute to One More Article/ ShawnBoom

The article I chose this week is "COVID-19 pandemic in New York City". I went to the supermarket and buy something I can't purchase from the online store today and there are so many crowds outside on the street and in the market, I mean everywhere, that makes me feel the pandemic is already gone. I also mention that there are too many people who take the street as home, I mean may way more people than before. So I want to know more about the portion of how local government reactions to people who have difficulty living inside of rooms. After reading through a couple of articles, I realized the government does care about everyone from a big picture perspective. And I also cited the couple points of what's government done for each people in the article I chose this week. Here is the difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=COVID-19_pandemic_in_New_York_City&type=revision&diff=984260976&oldid=983911352 --ShawnBoom (talk) 15:08, 19 October 2020 (UTC)

ShawnBoom, Avoid words that may introduce bias or are expressions that lack precision per MOS:VAGUE. Can you rephrase this a bit, such as around language such as "normal people?" Please ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 14:38, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for your remind and comment professor, I already rephrase my words above, please check it and let me know what you think, thank you.--ShawnBoom (talk) 15:10, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
ShawnBoom, What you added is in the lead, which should summarize what is already in the article. I recommend moving your add to the Public transport section. FULBERT (talk) 15:23, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for your comment professor, I already moved my add to the public transport section. Here is the new difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=COVID-19_pandemic_in_New_York_City&type=revision&diff=984339511&oldid=984260976 Please check it and let me know what you think, thank you. --ShawnBoom (talk) 16:17, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
ShawnBoom, Reads better now. Current. FULBERT (talk) 21:55, 20 October 2020 (UTC)

Week 5/Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article/DetongChe

I choose an artist who comes from Japan, I have researched him when I take graphic design classes. Here's the article link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Takashi_Murakami, and I added the citation link is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Animation. Since the "Animation Industry" did not have a good explanation in the article, so I added a sentence to the article. This is the link for difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Takashi_Murakami&type=revision&diff=982919994&oldid=981538443. After week 5, I clearly know a good citation is very significant for the article, also will be better for the reviewer to read the article with the right meaning. DetongChe (talk) 05:39, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

DetongChe, I reverted your edit as Wikipedia cannot be used as a source for itself. Please find a more reliable source for your claim and ping me here again and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 18:46, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

@FULBERT:I added the citation link switch to: https://www.moca.org/. This citation link will the part of his career experience and exhibition. Here's the link for difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Takashi_Murakami&type=revision&diff=983854547&oldid=983194121. DetongChe (talk) 17:08, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

DetongChe, Please remember to indent your replies with one colon " : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 20:16, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT, Thank you for your mentioned, is that looks good for now? DetongChe (talk) 22:45, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
DetongChe, Yes, good now and current. FULBERT (talk) 21:59, 20 October 2020 (UTC)

Week 7/ Add a citation / Martinmadison

Link to the comparison: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=GeForce_30_series&type=revision&diff=984208782&oldid=983567181 In this article, it describes the launch of a new tech product that is extremely popular among the consumers. People are trying their best to get as much information about inventory status as possible. I updated some information regarding the third party sales partners so that everyone knows where to buy it. Although the citation comes from a forum, it's an official announcement made by an NVIDIA sales department representative on the official website forum and the wording is trustworthy.Martinmadison (talk) 21:00, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

Martinmadison, This citation is based on the manufacturer's own claims. Can you find an external news or industry source to add in addition to further substantiate this claim and then ping me again here? FULBERT (talk) 14:29, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
I found two additional sources coming from tech media that further confirmed this news. Link1: https://www.techradar.com/news/nvidia-admits-defeat-with-rtx-3080-and-3090-founders-edition-stock-passes-baton-to-best-buy. Link2: https://www.tweaktown.com/news/75617/nvidia-geforce-rtx-30-series-founders-edition-locked-to-best-buy-in-us/index.html Martinmadison (talk) 19:58, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
Martinmadison, OK, don't just tell me, go and add them. FULBERT (talk) 21:58, 20 October 2020 (UTC)
Got it, just added them into the citation. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=GeForce_30_series&type=revision&diff=984585423&oldid=984515236 Martinmadison (talk) 22:28, 20 October 2020 (UTC)
Martinmadison, Great. Current. FULBERT (talk) 00:29, 21 October 2020 (UTC)

Week5 / Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article / Shangyingsun

This time, the article that I chose is Herberger Institute for Design and the Arts, add one citation on the art school, here is the link of the difference https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Herberger_Institute_for_Design_and_the_Arts&diff=prev&oldid=982860152 Through this part of work, I read the link of the article that professor provide on the Guide(s) for Working on Articles in Your Topic Area - Art history. Last time, I did some change on Arizona state university, this time I did change on the Herberger institute, it is one of the institute of ASU, it get more deeper and more specific on the article. I read it carefully and checked all the grammar and spelling, it is helpful to me and let me know how the wikipedia's article important to reader. Shangyingsun (talk) 20:34, 10 October 2020 (UTC)

Shangyingsun, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:27, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

Hi professor, I just assigned myself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard. Shangyingsun (talk) 06:14, 12 October 2020 (UTC)

Shangyingsun, Beyond adding a citation alone, make sure to provide a sentence or two to express your contribution in context (which the citation will support) to demonstrate how it adds to the knowledge in the article. Citations alone do not add value. Please add a sentence or two to explain what the citation adds and the ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 00:38, 14 October 2020 (UTC)

Hi professor, I've already edited the summary of my change and published it. But it not showing in my contribution and diff. I added a sentence to explained the change "add link of ASU art school, it will help reader to get more information about ASU art school." Shangyingsun (talk) 12:11, 14 October 2020 (UTC)

Shangyingsun, Please remember to indent your replies with one colon " : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 22:03, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
Hi professor, thank you for mention me to do this.Shangyingsun (talk) 00:32, 21 October 2020 (UTC)
Shangyingsun, OK. Current. FULBERT (talk) 00:34, 21 October 2020 (UTC)

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Week 7/Add a citation and contribute to one more article/Forza spurs

For this assignment, I assigned myself the article introducing Roger Mason Jr who was a former NBA player and here is the link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roger_Mason_Jr. I added a citation which contains the official statistics of Mason's NBA career to better demonstarte his career development when he was playing for San Antonio Spurs. The following is the link to diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Roger_Mason_Jr.&diff=984528685&oldid=984500489. In this process, I have realized that some articles about public figures who are not that famous is highly likely to make claims without evidence to support, so it is necessary to improve them.Forza spurs (talk) 15:46, 20 October 2020 (UTC)

Forza spurs, include a sentence or two to express your contribution in context and demonstrate how it adds to the knowledge in the article; don't just add a citation. Ping me when done. FULBERT (talk) 22:03, 20 October 2020 (UTC)
Hi, I have added a sentence to express my contribution and demosntrated the knowledge added in the article. Here is the link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Roger_Mason_Jr.&diff=984634735&oldid=984528685. Please check it. Thank you!Forza spurs (talk) 05:58, 21 October 2020 (UTC)
Forza spurs, Better as well. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:31, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

Week6 / Add a citation / dyy122dyy

1. The article I cite talks about Zhuangzi's void and quietness theory and its effects. 2. The link to the difference is: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Zhuang_Zhou&type=revision&diff=984768744&oldid=973796174 3, What I learned during the process is that how does Zhuangzi afffects the world and holds a new view towards the world.

FULBERT, Professor, I changed my week 6's citation.

Dyy122dyy (talk) 00:21, 22 October 2020 (UTC)

Dyy122dyy Your edit was reverted due to an other editor's claim it did not make sense; I will give it to you however this time. Current. --FULBERT (talk) 01:58, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
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