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Wikidata weekly summary #440

Here's your quick overview of what has been happening around Wikidata over the last week.
  • Discussions
    • Open request for adminship: Hasley (RfP scheduled to end after 2 November 2020 17:23 UTC)
  • Events
    • Past: Wikidata & Wikibase office hour, October 27 (notes)
    • Upcoming: Next Linked Data for Libraries LD4 Wikidata Affinity Group call: Arthur Smith and Daniel Mietchen discussing author items in Wikidata and the Author Disambiguator Tool, 3 November. Agenda
    • Upcoming: Online Wikidata editathon in Swedish #37, November 8
    • Upcoming: live SPARQL queries on Twitch and in French by Vigneron, November 3 at 18:00 CET
This is 32 hours of video covering 85 individual presentations in 7 languages.
1266 "unique viewers" have watched some portion on YouTubeSince the conference began last Monday.
  • Tool of the week
    • reCH is a Wikidata anti-vandalism tool that is used to review edits and patrol new changes.
  • Development
    • Fixing the issue of `content was: ""` (empty string) when deleting Lexemes (phab:T263435)
    • Final steps for deployment of JSON dumps for Lexeme (phab:T264883)
    • Working on fixing an issue with adding statements with datatype mathematical formula (phab:T266673)
    • The Query Builder can now generate its first very simple query and show the result. You can follow along as we develop it at the demo system.

You can see all open tickets related to Wikidata here. If you want to help, you can also have a look at the tasks needing a volunteer.

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Week 3 / Copyedit an Article / LBJJames

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:FULBERT/Archive_45#Week3%2FCopyedit_an_Article%2FLBJJames

FULBERT I changed the title format here. --LBJJames (talk) 22:49, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
LBJJames, Great. Current. FULBERT (talk) 23:02, 3 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 5 / Add a Citation to One Article / LBJJames

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:FULBERT/Archive_47#Week5/Add_a_Citation_to_One_Article/LBJJames

FULBERT i learned how to indent my reply to you.--LBJJames (talk) 22:59, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
LBJJames, Great. Current. FULBERT (talk) 23:02, 3 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 6 / Add a citation / Martinmadison

Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=2020_Summer_Olympics&type=revision&diff=986574878&oldid=986396371 This is the wiki page for the Tokyo 2020 Summer Olympic game and the impact of COVID-19 on it. I added some detail regarding the impact on insurance which covers the loss of cancellation and postpones of the Olympic game. Though the provider didn't disclose the exact loss amount on the contract, we can still use some available information to make an estimation. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Martinmadison (talk • contribs) 18:28, 1 November 2020 (UTC)

Martinmadison, Make sure to sign this in the future. Otherwise, good addition. Current. --FULBERT (talk) 23:15, 3 November 2020 (UTC)

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Week8/Add a Citation to two Article/LBJJames

I added some information about electrical device here https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=History_of_the_telephone&diff=985387978&oldid=984581661

I added some information about future(rapper) here https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Future_(rapper)&diff=985389264&oldid=982574459

I learned about how can i search my favorite article quickly and add information for wikipedia --LBJJames (talk) 17:53, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

LBJJames, Please re-add the articles you had originally listed that you were editing in the dashboard and find a better citation for the second article, as that one is not a high enough level. Ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 22:13, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT i add a function of commercial bank over there for a new second article.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Commercial_bank&diff=985790758&oldid=983957517--LBJJames (talk) 23:50, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
LBJJames, There is not agreement of using this as a reliable source per https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Perennial_sources#Investopedia so please identify and use an additional, more reliable source and ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 23:06, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT I changed and found a reliable citation here https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Commercial_bank&diff=986956430&oldid=985790758--LBJJames (talk) 00:00, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
LBJJames, Better. Done. Current. FULBERT (talk) 01:09, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 9 / Add Citations to 2 More Articles / LBJJames

The first article, i update the market share of Oracle and the future market development of oracle.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Oracle_Database&diff=986498142&oldid=983367213

The second article, i added an example to explain the relational model crearly.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Relational_database&diff=986498922&oldid=982386327

I learned about the knowledge of oracle market and some database basic knowledge.

--LBJJames (talk) 07:02, 1 November 2020 (UTC)

LBJJames, Good additions. Current. FULBERT (talk) 01:12, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Week7 / add a citation / dyy122dyy

1. I add an article about the explanation of the book <Mozi>, which includes the philosophy of the philosopher Mozi. 2. The link to the difference is :https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Mozi&type=revision&diff=985127880&oldid=985064101 3. What I learned in the process is how Mozi focuses on self-cultivation and how we improve our selves.

FULBERT: Professor, I have changed an ariticle to cite.

Dyy122dyy (talk) 03:41, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

Dyy122dyy, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 19:26, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
            • {u|FULBERT}}: Professor, I have assigned myself this article.

Dyy122dyy (talk) 12:15, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

Dyy122dyy, OK. Done. Current. FULBERT (talk) 01:53, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 8 / Add 2 citations / dyy122dyy

1. This week I read two articles, one talking about Deng xiaoping and another talking about Hu jintao. 2. The link to differences are :https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Deng_Xiaoping&type=revision&diff=985869513&oldid=985460366, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Hu_Jintao&type=revision&diff=985875823&oldid=981424493 . 3. This week the two articles I read both talking about China's president. I compare their different polices and learn their different strategies in different era. Dyy122dyy (talk) 04:25, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

Dyy122dyy, Good additions. CUrrent. FULBERT (talk) 01:56, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 8 / Add Citations to 2 Articles / ASCXX

First article:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bystander_effect

link to diff:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bystander_effect&diff=986652933&oldid=983668956

Second article:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Turnover_(employment)

Link to diff:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Turnover_(employment)&diff=986653192&oldid=980711167

I was really worried about my editing before because I do not want to edit anything incorrect or not accurate. It is challenging to find an article that I can edit, but I am enjoying the process of editing an article now. I Can wait to challenge editing a picture to the wiki in few weeks FULBERT

--ASCXX (talk) 05:25, 2 November 2020 (UTC)

ASCXX, Nice additions. Current. FULBERT (talk) 02:10, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 8 / Add Citations to 2 Articles / JS11323

In this week, I found two articles, first one is "Disability", and second one is "Social Exclusion". For the first one, I add a sentence about the number of disability in the world's population. And next one I add a sentence about the concept of social exclusion. Here is the link of "Disability": https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Disability. Here is the difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Disability&type=revision&diff=986233218&oldid=986049148. And here is the link of "Social Exclusion": https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_exclusion. Here is the difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Social_exclusion&type=revision&diff=986234865&oldid=984028764. This is a little bit hard for me to find a citation, since my citations have been reverted several times, but I will try my best. --Js11323 (talk) 16:40, 30 October 2020 (UTC)

Js11323, Both edits are much higher quality than last week. Current. FULBERT (talk) 02:14, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 6 / Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article / Bbbzhu

This week the article I edited is about online video analytics. Here's the difference link. During the finding of the article process, I learned that WikiProjects is a good place to go to. I could look up the grid to find low or mid importance articles with start or stub class quality, which needs more work on content improvement and reference to reliable sources. Then I could start with researching topics I am familiar with, and then find reliable sources to fill the knowledge gap. --Bbbzhu (talk) 03:18, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

Bbbzhu, Nice addition. Current. FULBERT (talk) 02:20, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 7 / Contribute to One More Article/ Bbbzhu

This week I edited the cloud gaming Wiki page. Here's the difference link. I found that it is more satisfying to try to find a topic that I'm interested in. Already have some knowledge on the topic gives me a huge advantage so that I won't need to start reading about the most basics to understand it for research. Some of the content on the Wiki page can be old and out dated especially in the internet and technology areas. We as editors can do a lot to help keep those pages current. --Bbbzhu (talk) 03:58, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

Bbbzhu, I agree completely with your assessment that it is easier to edit articles you have an interest in. Current. FULBERT (talk) 02:21, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Week7 / Contribute to One More Article / Muzizimu

I added in some information about a artist called Giorgio Vasari for this week. Here is the link to difference: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=History_of_art_criticism&type=revision&diff=985676181&oldid=984303002 I learned to use a different library source to find more high quality resources which helps me a lot on my paper. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Muzizimu (talk • contribs) 08:37, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

Muzizimu, Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --FULBERT (talk) 02:19, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT sorry about the mistake, please take a look again, thank you!Muzizimu (talk) 02:30, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
Muzizimu, OK now. Current. FULBERT (talk) 02:38, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Week7/Add a Citation to One Article/ CaptainJoseph

Hi! In week 7, I cite one article, it is a game called Devil May Cry 5. I put the recent new announcement out, which the wiki article hasn't mentioned yet. Here is the diff link.

Thank you very much! CaptainJoseph (talk) 23:04, 29 October 2020 (UTC)

CaptainJoseph, OK, and it is nice to see other editors already improved upon your edit. Current. FULBERT (talk) 00:49, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Week8/Add a Citation to two Article/ CaptainJoseph

Hi! In week 8, I cite two articles, first one is a game called Sekiro: Shadows Die Twice, second one is about cyberbullying

In the first article, I point out the recent big updates for that game that haven't mentioned before, here is diff link. In the second article I mentioned that cyberbullying can be determined by morden computer techniques, because no one talked about it. Here is the diff link.

Thanks! CaptainJoseph (talk) 23:06, 29 October 2020 (UTC)

CaptainJoseph, Other editors improved upon one and the second was fine. Good edits. Current. FULBERT (talk) 00:50, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Week7 / Contribute to One More Article / Ywrhea

1.Summary: Gustave Le Bon illustrated how individuals are influenced by the ideas and emotions spread by the crowd. When people have the same psychological appeal, it is possible to form a group. When individuals form a group, they will have the psychological characteristics of mental decline, impulsiveness, and self-confidence. I changed three references to this article. Since this is an introduction to Gustave Le Bon's theory, the original text written by Gustave Le Bon will be more convincing than quoting others' summary of his theory. Therefore, I use the original sources rather than secondary sources in this article.

2.The link to difference is https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/985326335

3. After this process, I think crowd psychology is a complex system theory, and its knowledge is very important for senior managers. Even for ordinary people, we have to be a little wary of public opinion in our daily lives, because public opinion does not always represent rationality, and sometimes it may be irresponsible. Ywrhea (talk) 09:31, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Ywrhea, Beyond adding a citation alone, make sure to provide a sentence or two to express your contribution in context (which the citation will support) to demonstrate how it adds to the knowledge in the article. Citations alone do not add value. Please add a sentence or two to explain what the citation adds and the ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 19:31, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT,I have added one more sentence to it, please check. The link of new difference is https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/986380790.Ywrhea (talk) 14:06, 31 October 2020 (UTC)
Ywrhea, OK; nice additions. Current. FULBERT (talk) 00:53, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 8/ Add Citations to 2 Articles/ Ywrhea

1. I add different citations to the two articles. The first one analyzes the determinants of divestiture at specific industry and company level, the financial and organizational impact of divestiture, and then summarizes the integration of decentralized divestiture knowledge. The second one mainly discusses the long-term performance of divestiture and equity divestiture, and finds that the choice of divestiture method has an important impact on the long-term performance after divestiture. 2. Link to differences are (1) https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special :MobileDiff/986556414 (2) https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special :MobileDiff/986558092 3. I am surprised to find that even for academic topics, sometimes the completion of corresponding articles on Wikipedia is relatively poor. There are no corresponding references for many concepts and explanations. In addition, the arrangement of article structure is not reasonable. Therefore, we need to improve them with more literatures we have read. Ywrhea (talk) 16:39, 1 November 2020 (UTC)

Ywrhea, Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 00:54, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Week2 / Evaluate A Article / Jooookerr

Professor, I have assigned myself the article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard, please check.

Here is the archive page website for week 2: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:FULBERT/Archive_47 The link to my evaluation is:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Video_game_design My edit version of the article link is:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Video_game_design&type=revision&diff=983073888&oldid=978118468 Jooookerr (talk) 08:36, 3 November 2020 (UTC)

Jooookerr, Great. Current. FULBERT (talk) 00:57, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Week3 / Copyedit an Article / Jooookerr

Professor, I have assigned myself the article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard, please check.

Here is the archive page website for week 3: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:FULBERT/Archive_47 The link to my evaluation is:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/League_of_Legends My edit version of the article link is:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=League_of_Legends&type=revision&diff=983078853&oldid=982984168

I have checked that the other editor has simplified some of my sentences to make the sentence more fluent and easy to understand. Jooookerr (talk) 08:39, 3 November 2020 (UTC)

Jooookerr, These are overall good edits. You should have added a citation as well, but given how many edits you made across this one article, it is ok for now. Current. FULBERT (talk) 00:59, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 4/ Add citation for the article / Jooookerr

Professor, I have assigned myself the article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard, please check.

Here is the archive page website for week 4: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:FULBERT/Archive_47 The link to my evaluation is:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Card_game My edit version of the article link is:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Card_game&type=revision&diff=983081771&oldid=981118191 Jooookerr (talk) 08:43, 3 November 2020 (UTC)

Jooookerr, Good addition. Current. FULBERT (talk) 01:01, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 2 Evaluate a article

I read the article of COVID-19 pandemic in North Asia and I found the data statistics is out of date and missing the citation of data source，so I add the update data result and list the source of data. Here is the link of my evaluation：https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yhl7283/Evaluate_an_Article?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_evaluate_article# Yhl7283 (talk) 06:12, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Yhl7283, OK, good thoughts here. Current. FULBERT (talk) 01:04, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 2 Evaluate a article/ yl7283

1. I read the article of COVID-19 pandemic in North Asia and I found the article missing the source of data and the data is out of data. Then I make comment of need to update the data statistics and provide the source of data to COVID-19 pandemic in North Asia. 2. Evaluation link：https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yhl7283/Evaluate_an_Article?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_evaluate_article# Here is the link of my comment to the article https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yhl7283/Evaluate_an_Article?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_evaluate_article# I learned how to evaluate a article and evaluate it in which areas. Yhl7283 (talk) 06:46, 4 November 2020 (UTC) Yhl7283 (talk) 10:31, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/987020877 Yhl7283 (talk) 11:06, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Yhl7283, This one also appears to be a repeat. If it was accidental, please reply. --FULBERT (talk) 01:06, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 3: copyedit a article / yl7283

The article I copyedited is https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ant_Group The link to the differ: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/987022382 I learned to edit the content through Wikipedia edit page and make citation. Yhl7283 (talk) 11:31, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Yhl7283, Nice clarification. Current. FULBERT (talk) 01:07, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 8/ Add Citations to 2 Articles/ Shangying

In this week, I selected "kaws" article, Kaws is pop-art that most young people interested in. I add one link that related to the artist and his art work "kaws" to let people know more about him. here is the link of diff. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Kaws&diff=prev&oldid=986033949 Another article that I chose is my hometown Zaozhuang, I found that here is very few citations for this article, almost none. I add a link in this article, it related to the history. From this assignment, I also understand why professor asked us to modify the articles in Wikipedia. Indeed, many articles are not perfect. here is the link of diff. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Zaozhuang&diff=prev&oldid=986034626 Shangyingsun (talk) 12:12, 29 October 2020 (UTC)

Shangyingsun, Beyond adding a citation alone, make sure to provide a sentence or two to express your contribution in context (which the citation will support) to demonstrate how it adds to the knowledge in the article. Citations alone do not add value. Please add a sentence or two to explain what the citation adds and the ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 02:25, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT, I added the sentence before the citation that I added to the article. here is the link of diff, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Zaozhuang&diff=prev&oldid=987034923 https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.phptitle=Kaws&diff=prev&oldid=987034337

Shangyingsun (talk) 13:49, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Shangyingsun, Ahh, got it. Good. Current. FULBERT (talk) 01:11, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Week7 / Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article / Shangyingsun

In this week, I chose the article of Taobao, it is very famous in China. I found this article shows content that is written like an advertisement. I read the article detailing, here might need more information on this article, so I add a citation on the "Ali pay" to let more people know what it is. From this week, I understand that wikipedia's article need more person to correct it or add more information on some article, this small change will help people to learn more things about each article and avoid misunderstanding. Here is the link of the diff. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Taobao&diff=prev&oldid=985232396 Shangyingsun (talk) 19:19, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

Shangyingsun, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 19:28, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
Hi professor, I just assigned myself this article in the Wiki edu dashboard.Shangyingsun (talk) 23:27, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
Shangyingsun, OK; add a sentence or two to the article to demonstrate your contribution and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 22:16, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
Hi professor, I think I've already added sentence to the article to demonstrate my contribution, "add Ali pay website to let more people know what Ali pay is."

Shangyingsun (talk) 11:44, 29 October 2020 (UTC)

Shangyingsun, You added that to the edit summary; this assignment requires you to add a sentence or two to the article itself in addition to the citation. Add it to the article and ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 02:23, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT,sorry about the misunderstanding, I have added the sentence before the citation to the article itself, here is the diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Taobao&diff=prev&oldid=987032912 Shangyingsun (talk) 13:31, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
Shangyingsun, This edit was reverted, though I think we already discussed this article, so OK for now. Current. FULBERT (talk) 01:13, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 2 Evaluate a article

1. I read the article of COVID-19 pandemic in North Asia and I found the article missing the source of data and the data is out of data. Then I make comment of need to update the data statistics and provide the source of data to COVID-19 pandemic in North Asia. 2. Evaluation link：https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yhl7283/Evaluate_an_Article?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_evaluate_article# Here is the link of my comment to the article https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yhl7283/Evaluate_an_Article?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_evaluate_article# I learned how to evaluate a article and evaluate it in which areas. Yhl7283 (talk) 06:46, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Yhl7283, Why was this repeated from above? Is that what you intended? FULBERT (talk) 01:05, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

I’m so sorry that the first two was published by mistake. The last one is the correct one. Yhl7283 (talk) 12:08, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 4: Add a citation to the article/ yl7283

The citation I added is a real time data statistic of world pandemic update. Here is the link of difference in vision: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/987025155 Through this week, I learned about how to training to add citation through my sandbox. Yhl7283 (talk) 12:18, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Yhl7283, This appears repeated of the above. FULBERT (talk) 01:09, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

I’m so sorry that I was tried to edit it but published twice by mistake Yhl7283 (talk) 12:10, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Yhl7283, You can always delete it in Wikipedia, but don't worry about it at this point. FULBERT (talk) 18:19, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 9/ Add Citations to 2 Articles/ Shangying

In this week, I add citations in my hometown article Shandong and the article Confucius, Confucius is my hometown's culture. I provide a sentence in article to demonstrate how it works to the knowledge in the article. From this week's practice, I learned how to introduce and explain your citation before you add it in the article, as professor mentioned me before that Citations alone do not add value. here is the first link of diff. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Confucius&diff=prev&oldid=987037455 the second link of diff. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Shandong&diff=prev&oldid=987036562 Shangyingsun (talk) 10:26, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Shangyingsun, Gooed edits overall. Current. FULBERT (talk) 18:26, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

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Week 8/ Add Citations to 2 Articles/ 八路军被服厂李厂长

This week I edited two articles with two high quality references.

The link of difference to the first article: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Financial_technology&type=revision&diff=986089775&oldid=986082072 In this article, I've added a sentence to explain blockchain's main feature to make the logic much more smoothly.

The link of difference to the second article:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Cryptocurrency&type=revision&diff=986091695&oldid=985711351 In this article, I found the token section gives misunderstanding about token and cryptocurrency, so I explained the differences among those two terms with a high-quality resources.

In this week, one of my edit was revert and it talks about I had violate the wiki copy-right policy, and funny thing is I don't even know how's that considered as plagiarism, if I write in my own words and labeled citations. Got me confused lol :)--八路军被服厂李厂长 (talk) 19:04, 29 October 2020 (UTC)

八路军被服厂李厂长, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 02:27, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
FULBERTCryptocurrency and Financial Technology articles were assigned--八路军被服厂李厂长 (talk) 19:03, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
八路军被服厂李厂长, Good on both. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:03, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 9/ Add Citations to 2 Articles/ 八路军被服厂李厂长

The first article is called Too big to fail, which indicates the banks and financial institutions are controlling too much of the financial assets that can't closed and bankrupt. This situation have become concern for regulatory agency after 2008 financial crisis. In this article, the section when its talk about the deposit banking before and at the time of crisis, but not talking about what the banks learned after crisis. So I used one of my high-quality journal to support my edits. The link to the difference page. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Too_big_to_fail&type=revision&diff=987254074&oldid=984425897

The second article is about Mobile commerce, this was one of keyword showed in my peer-view reference.It was talking about the history of the mobile financial activities. In the history section, the latest information about mobile commerce stopped at 2012, so I ve added one paragraph that explain the current market of mobile commerce and expectation for this business. Here is the link to the difference page https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Mobile_commerce&type=revision&diff=987259330&oldid=978218823

In this week, I was short of articles that interest in. Then I was looking for the keywords, and luckily found two keywords that have articles. I believed with more narrow down on my literature review, I would find some interest points.--八路军被服厂李厂长 (talk) 22:33, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

八路军被服厂李厂长, The language is a little awkward in places, but good enough citations for our needs. Let another editor tweak them as the citations are fine. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:05, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

Week 8/ Add Citations to 2 Articles/ 燕京赵大知识分子

This week I read an article about business informatics and another one about applied research. The motivation is from a movie I watched today about how advanced software and hardware systems in the future change the way businesses operate and eventually become monopolies based on superior algorithms. The movie also has scenes of applied research in a lab to solve issues for the company. I've noticed that a number of citations are missing for more "general term" articles, so it'd be helpful to find more sources.

Link for 1st article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Applied_science#Applied_research Link for 1st article diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Applied_science&type=revision&diff=986359534&oldid=986054154 Link for 2nd article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business_informatics Link for 2nd article diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Business_informatics&type=revision&diff=986361193&oldid=983018532 燕京赵大知识分子 (talk) 11:06, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

燕京赵大知识分子, Beyond adding a citation alone, make sure to provide a sentence or two to express your contribution in context (which the citation will support) to demonstrate how it adds to the knowledge in the article. Citations alone do not add value. Please add a sentence or two to explain what the citation adds and the ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 00:52, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT, this is the new difference link for the first article: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Applied_science&type=revision&diff=987120115&oldid=986359534 And new difference link for 2nd article: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Business_informatics&type=revision&diff=987121341&oldid=986361193燕京赵大知识分子 (talk) 01:33, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
燕京赵大知识分子, Both of the sentences you added to these two articles are somewhat confusing and vague. Can you take one more time with them both and clarify what you are adding from the two citations? FULBERT (talk) 18:37, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT, Please see these new changes. Hopefully they are clearer in meaning now. :) https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Applied_science&type=revision&diff=987263726&oldid=987120115, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Business_informatics&type=revision&diff=987264457&oldid=987121341.
燕京赵大知识分子 Better. Please be sure to sign your posts. OK for now. Current. --FULBERT (talk) 22:09, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

week6/adding a citation/Soymilkp20

I add a citation to a article of Genome Informatics. As i searching resources for the article, i find a book call <Human genome informatics : translating genes into health>. I think it is a really good sources. i add application to the article, which the original one did not have it. I think it is important to people to know what genome informatics can do for people or the meaning for studying it. I think if people want to know it they can read the book. I only cit a very little information, because it is really science stuff. I think i can only provide general information. But the book is valuable. Here is the differ:differ I think i learn that when you do the assignment, i actually learn more than i excepted. It is not only for people who could read the article, it is also for myself. Soymilkp20 (talk) 07:01, 6 November 2020 (UTC)

Soymilkp20, The language is awkward in some places and it should be a top-level header, but good enough. Please have a diff to the edits themselves and not to the history next time. OK for now. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:13, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

week7/adding a citation/Soymilkp20

For this week, I add a citation to <Demographics of China>. I notice that it did not mention that china open two-child policy. So, i find s peer reviewed article and add it to it. Here is the differ:differ What i learn is that when i add the citation---the link, it shows up (Check date values in: ) this red label. So i click help and find out that when you add the citation of the day that the article publish, you have to follow Wikipedia Manual of Style's guidance, and make sure that is a real date. Even though i use DOI to generate the citation it could still cause a problem. There are a lot of rules when you cit to make sure wiki sources are all rigorous academic articles. Soymilkp20 (talk) 08:19, 6 November 2020 (UTC)

Soymilkp20, Still some awkward language, but ok. Please have the correct diff link in the next assignment. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:15, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

week8/adding two citation/Soymilkp20

First article i add citation is <Baby hatch> I add to a section that there is no citation for the part Legal aspects of japan Here is the differ:differ Second article i am interested is <Automotive industry in China: Revision history> As i read the article i noticed that some one leave a note that Electric vehicles still want more new update. So i add a citation about China License plate control and what is that meaning to Electric vehicles. Here is the differ:differ What i learn is that if people want to make a change, we can start with the labels that indicate this section need citation or more quality sources. Soymilkp20 (talk) 15:20, 6 November 2020 (UTC)

Soymilkp20, Interesting articles, about which I learned as well. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:19, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

week5/add a citation/Soymilkp20

I add a citation to a article of <Made in China> I add that citation because Made in China is more meaningful than before. Not only a label we see on a cloth/furniture/necessities. "Made in China 2025" is a plan is the future. Here is the differ:differ What i learn, so much stuff you can add but when you add have to be careful what is already written in the article. Soymilkp20 (talk) 15:54, 6 November 2020 (UTC)

Soymilkp20, Nice addition. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:21, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

week4/add a citation/Soymilkp20

I add a another citation for week 4. This article is about Women and smoking. I add this citation because there are more potential danger during pregnancy if women smoke. Here is the differ:differ I learn that when you read through the article, sometime you want to know more about the topic and you do more research on it. Soymilkp20 (talk) 16:48, 6 November 2020 (UTC)

Soymilkp20, Nice addition. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:21, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
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