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Week 9/ Assignment 9 / Sleep by 11

1.The first article talked about Evergrande's debt problems and I have added the latest about its problems. so that future readers can see what is up to date, rather than what is out of date.

2.I have added the detailed results of this controversial event to the content of this company, Baidu's scandal. It completes the content of this article. Otherwise the reader would have seen a content without an ending.

3.From the very beginning of this extra credit assignment, I felt overwhelmed. I couldn't understand many of the functions in the system and I didn't know what the professor wanted us to do. The professor was very patient and took us through each revision, and slowly through this step-by-step learning process, I figured out how to edit Wikipedia.

In addition to this, during the editing process, I gained a deep understanding of why it is important to add citations and respect the copyright of others. I also learnt where to find information and what perspective is objective when I have to write an article myself. I also learnt to consider the feelings of the reader of an encyclopaedic article.

Anyway, I learnt a lot from this extra credit assignment. This is something I couldn't have learned in any other way. This immersive learning has helped me to understand how to be a writer and a content producer.

4.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Evergrande_Group&diff=1057778886&oldid=1056592711 https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Baidu&diff=1057780373&oldid=1054224973

Sleep by 11 (talk) 16:56, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11 OK on these. Glad you found the assignment helpful. Current on Week 9.

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Copyvio of Clinical metagenomic sequencing

I saw that you commented here. I take it that you are an instructor at NYU for a "Research Process and Methodology course".

I am a bit shocked that you would let Alba Olaso Llorca (your student I assume) get away with a 95% copyvio. I would have thought that if you see flawless English for miles in an article of such complexity by a non-native speaker youd get sceptical or at least you should be using a Copyvio Detector.

IMO the article needs to be completely re-written--Wuerzele (talk) 16:11, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Wuerzele, Thanks for your message here, though please review that situation as that user is not my student. My comment on that page was that it needed more sources overall. FULBERT (talk) 23:26, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/Assignment 6/Huilin826

1. The article I added was "Electronics industry in China". It describes the electronics industry in China grew rapidly after the economy under the national strategic policy. China becomes the world's largest market for personal computers.

2. The link diff:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Electronics_industry_in_China&type=revision&diff=1055193387&oldid=1040614979

3. I learned that I find the citation from the Science Book to support it. Huilin826 (talk) 12:30, 14 November 2021 (UTC)

Huilin826, Please see the feedback you received on this and how the edit was removed due to copyright violation. See the comments on your Talk page about this. As a reminder, everything you contribute must be stated in your own words and never using exactly the words from others that you cite. Revise this and any of the others that were also removed due to copyright issues and then ping me on each of them and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 02:54, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT This is link diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Electronics_industry_in_China&type=revision&diff=1057683439&oldid=1056562132Huilin826 (talk) 01:33, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
Huilin826, Better source and addition. Current with Week 6. --FULBERT (talk) 23:29, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/Assignment 7/Huilin826

1. The first article I added was "Automotive industry in China". It describes China's automobile industry has always been the largest in the world and annual automobile production for each year.

The diff link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Automotive_industry_in_China&type=revision&diff=1056553603&oldid=1051545398

2. The second article I added was "Manufacturing in the United States". It describes manufacturing as a vital sector in the United States and recovered from the Great Recession.

The diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Manufacturing_in_the_United_States&type=revision&diff=1056559645&oldid=1042928241

3. I learned from two articles that were I should find more specific information from peer-reviewed articles to support it. Huilin826 (talk) 13:47, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

Huilin826, Please see the feedback you received on this and how the edit was removed due to copyright violation. See the comments on your Talk page about this. As a reminder, everything you contribute must be stated in your own words, and never use exactly the words from others that you cite. Revise this and any of the others that were also removed due to copyright issues and then ping me on each of them and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 21:37, 27 November 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT This is a first link diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Automotive_industry_in_China&type=revision&diff=1057686962&oldid=1056567487

This is the second link diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Manufacturing_in_the_United_States&type=revision&diff=1057689572&oldid=1056564343Huilin826 (talk) 02:15, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Huilin826, Better edits. Current on Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 23:33, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/Assignment 8/Huilin826

1. The first article I added was "History of education in China".It talks about the origin of education and different approaches of education into modern education. The link diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=History_of_education_in_China&type=revision&diff=1057692684&oldid=1051705692

2. The second article I added was "Construction industry of India". It provides the background of the construction industry and challenges faced the year by year. The link diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Construction_industry_of_India&type=revision&diff=1057693671&oldid=1055317800

3. I learned from two articles that different articles are based on the same high-quality source. Huilin826 (talk) 02:58, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Huilin826, These are fine overall. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 23:35, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Week6/ Assignment-Citation and Contribution/ Emilyyxx

1. Project is the general topic related to my research paper. I also took classes related to the topic and read several books about project management, so I think I might be able to contribute a little on the Wikipedia page.

2. The Link of Diff.

3. On the original Wikipedia page, I think there's a lack of a concise definition of project, so I decided to add one based on the PMBOK Guide, an official guide of project management published the Project Management Institute. --Emilyyxx (talk) 02:27, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Emilyyxx, This edit is a nice contribution. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 23:40, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Week7/ Assignment7/ Emilyyxx

1. As I was looking at the digital marketing wiki page, I found that some of the references are outdated, so I decided to add to the strategies section cited with a new journal. I chose luosifen to be my second article because it is one of my favorite food.

2. Link to the diff: -Link to the diff. - Digital Marketing -Link to the diff. -Luosifen

3. I used to use Wikipedia as a major source to learn topics I am interested in, but I realized that I probably should always check the date of the references first to make sure I am not learning the outdated contents.--Emilyyxx (talk) 03:22, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Emilyyxx, Nice contributions for Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 23:41, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Week8/ Assignment8/ Emilyyxx

1. I chose a book and an author for this week's assignment. There are only limited info about the book or the author, so I edited a bit and included citations.

2. Link to the diff. - To Live

Link to the diff. - Rao xueman

3. The articles on Wilipedia often helps, but the contents might be incomplete, so it is important to do more research before take the contents on Wikipedia as truth. I also took a look at the editing history, it is nice to see how many people contributed in different parts to help each other understand the contents better.--Emilyyxx (talk) 04:36, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Emilyyxx, Nice contributions here. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 23:42, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Week9/ Adding an image/ Emilyyxx

1. Dragon Boat Festival is one of my most favorite festival, and zongzi is a typical food people will have on that day. I looked over the article and did not find a picture of the type of the way people wrap zongzi in my hometown, so I added an image that I took last year of a home-made zongzi.

2.Link to the diff

3. By learning this week's training, I realized that there are different types of licenses of the images and understood what type of images fit on Wikipedia.

4. In the whole process of editing on Wikipedia, I did a lot of research on the topics. I learned a lot about the topics and the rules of editing. I learned that Wikipedia is not the proper reference, but the rules here tend to help editors and readers can learn and contribute on all of these different topics. Without Wikipedia, it might be really hard for us to learn about something that we do not know about.

I probably will continue editing on Wikipedia for the areas I am interested in or on the topics which I've done a lot research on. One of the reasons is that I would like to help more people understand and learn about the things that I like. For example, I added a picture of zongzi from my hometown because I want people to know that there are more different types of zongzi. Also if I've done enough researches on a certain topic in the future, I would like to edit the related topic to allow people get the most recent information or research results on the topic just to help update.--Emilyyxx (talk) 05:26, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Emilyyxx, Nice reasoning for this addition, and thanks for sharing your perspective on this entire editing experience! FULBERT (talk) 23:43, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

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Week 5/ Assignment 5 / Baezoey

1. The article I am working on is related to my interested topic.League of Legends League of Legends recently lanches their first TV series Arcane. So I checked the related content in this article and added some details to it.

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=League_of_Legends&diff=1056708526&oldid=1056592251

3. I learned that Wikipedia needs people to keep updating new information or knowledge they acquired through this process. The article could be lack details at the beginning, but as long as people add new content, it becomes more and more completed and updated.Baezoey (talk) 23:57, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

Baezoey, Nice edit. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 01:43, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/ Assignment 6 / Baezoey

1. I am working on a topic-realated article.Overwatch League I added more details about the format of 2021 season.

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Overwatch_League&diff=1057006381&oldid=1054438020

3. I found a confusing description in the article so I made a change and cited it. I learned that it is important to review these wiki articles and fix the issues we find through this process.Baezoey (talk) 21:32, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

Baezoey, Nice edit to this article as well. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 01:44, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/ Assignment 7 / Baezoey

1. I picked two articles through Find Article that related to my interested topic. One is Global Esports Federation, one is Esports. The article Global Esports Federation has multiple issues: it may not meet Wikipedia's notability guidelines for companies and organizations and may contain excessive or inappropriate references to self-published sources.

2. Link to the diff: [Global Esports Federation] https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Global_Esports_Federation&diff=1057699667&oldid=1048227709 [Esports] https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Esports&diff=1057703220&oldid=1057606140

3. I learned that for articles that do not have many sources to support, it is really hard to find enough non-self-published sources. But for articles backed by many sources, when we make a claim, we need sources on both sides of the statement.Baezoey (talk) 04:46, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Baezoey, Nice edits, especially the one on esports itself. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 01:45, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week5 / assignment 5/ BaixinH

1. I edited Jay Chou's wiki page, my favorite singer. When browsing his materials, I found that there was a song released in 2018 missing from his song introduction, so I added this song. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jay_Chou&type=revision&diff=1056771186&oldid=1056639169 3. Although everyone can edit wikis, we need to find as reliable reference materials as possible in order to be responsible to others. It will take a little more time, but we can be more confident in our materials.BaixinH (talk) 13:00, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

BaixinH, Nice edit. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 01:48, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week6 / assignment 6/ BaixinH

1. My hometown is Xi'an, and I'm curious about are there some errors about it. I know the latest change about it, so I could add the fresh information on it. I find in the metro part it miss the newest metro line, so I added it and add an citation. However, the Wiki can not generate the citation by URL itself, so I have to use the manual to generate the citation. I miss type the date format at the first time, so I make another change on it. You could see I have two difference pages. 2. Add information with wrong date format. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Xi%27an&type=revision&diff=1056784410&oldid=1055217335 correct the format. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Xi%27an&type=revision&diff=1056784649&oldid=1056784410 3. I have learned that when I click the publish icon, I need to make sure everything is correct.BaixinH (talk) 14:52, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

BaixinH, Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 01:53, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week7 / assignment 7/ BaixinH

Article 1 1. I correct the name of the player. The former version misused the game ID of this player as his real name. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ame_%28gamer%29&type=revision&diff=1056795648&oldid=1051464213 3. We need to make clear what information we get and do not make mistake.

Article 2 1. I added the newest IPO situation to Bilibili in the history part. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bilibili&type=revision&diff=1056797380&oldid=1049925895 3. It is important to keep the information in the latest status.BaixinH (talk) 16:26, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

BaixinH, Nice edits. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 02:10, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week8 / assignment 8/ BaixinH

1. I updated the latest student number information and added the citation. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Central_University_of_Finance_and_Economics&type=revision&diff=1056802201&oldid=1054798096 3. Every information added to a wiki needs a reliable source of information.

1. I updated the latest restriction on juvenile implemented by the honor of kings 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Honor_of_Kings&type=revision&diff=1056806924&oldid=1053658486 3. Policy changed from time to time and we need to take care of it change and refresh the information timely.BaixinH (talk) 17:39, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

BaixinH, Nice edits. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 02:11, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week9 / assignment 9/ BaixinH

1. I added a picture of a raw xiaolngbao on the xiaolongbao page. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Xiaolongbao&type=revision&diff=1057847550&oldid=1052074012 3. It is important to protect the copyright and we need to find some materials suitable for the policy. 4. I find this extra credit an interesting experience. It not only enlarged my knowledge, but also gave me a chance to help others. I find it feels good to help others. I will continue to contribute to the Wiki as long as I have the ability and not ban by IP.BaixinH (talk) 01:09, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

BaixinH, Nice reflections on this assignment and I hope you continue editing! Current with Week 9. FULBERT (talk) 02:13, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/Assignment 6/Chenjshi

1. Qoros is a fast-growing automobile company in China. I am very interested in the strategy adopted by the company, so I chose this article. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Qoros 2. This is the new information I added, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Qoros&type=revision&diff=1057068896&oldid=1020582805 3. The information I added can make the article more detailed and let everyone understand this article more complete. I learned that a complete information chain can make the article more logical and persuasive.Chenjshi (talk) 07:42, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Chenjshi, Nice edit. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 02:19, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/Assignment 7/Chenjshi

1. I found an article about new energy companies. I think the concept of green energy is very important now, so I chose this article. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Solar_Energy_Corporation_of_India Another article about Chinese restaurants abroad, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_restaurant

2. I added some content to these two articles (1). https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Solar_Energy_Corporation_of_India&type=revision&diff=1057083558&oldid=1047588510 (2). https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Chinese_restaurant&type=revision&diff=1057086977&oldid=1055099882

3. I added more detailed information to these two articles so that we can better understand the content of the article. By updating the information, I also gained a lot of knowledge about Wikipedia, it is a multi-functional information library, we can edit and learn at the same time.Chenjshi (talk) 11:02, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Chenjshi, Nice edits on both these. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 02:20, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8 / Assignment 8/Chenjshi

1. I found two articles that interest me and modified them, one about Chinese animation, and one about at-risk students. 1). https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_animation 2). https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/At-risk_students 2. Here are two differ link: 1)https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Chinese_animation&type=revision&diff=1057843079&oldid=1057073070 2). https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=At-risk_students&type=revision&diff=1057850310&oldid=1015999825 3. I added some details in the two articles, which can better help us understand the article. Regarding the first article, I added some details about the connection between film and literature. I learned the details to make the article more complete and meaningful. Regarding the second article, I learned that school could impact students' performance on many levels, including grades and self-evaluation; it is crucial in a single student's life.Chenjshi (talk) 01:42, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

Chenjshi, Nice edits on both these. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 02:21, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week8 / Assignment8 / Damonmand

1. I chose one of my favorite game PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds Mobile. and I found that the event about India banned this game need more citation to prove, so I added the corresponding citation. This is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=PlayerUnknown%27s_Battlegrounds_Mobile&diff=1057681177&oldid=1057592953 2. I chose Pubg: New State which is a new mobile game that invented by Krafton and PUBG company, it is a new game and the information is not enoygh, so I add a citatoion to help it prove the introdcution. This is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=PUBG:_New_State&diff=1057682142&oldid=1057269332

Based on what I study, I found out that many new articals lack of enough citation or information and we need to work about it base on what I interesting in.Damonmand (talk) 01:26, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Damonmand, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 02:24, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
Damonmand, Week 8 is now current. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:34, 10 December 2021 (UTC)

Week9 / Assignment9 / Damonmand

1. I chose one of my favorite game League of Legends: Wild Rift. and I found that the event about Riot refused to invent mobile game need citation to prove, so I added the corresponding citation. This is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=League_of_Legends:_Wild_Rift&diff=1057685240&oldid=1052844531 2. I chose Riot Game which is a company that own Leagye of Legends, the information of the relationship between itself and Tecent need more citations, so I add a citatoion to help it prove the introdcution. This is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Riot_Games&diff=1057687344&oldid=1057356946

Based on what I study, I found out that even many articals already had citations but it still not enough, some information needs more than one or two citation. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Damonmand (talkcontribs) 02:02, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Damonmand Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. Also, be sure to sign your posts. --FULBERT (talk) 02:24, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
Damonmand, Week 9 is now current, and thank you for providing your final thoughts on this experience! --- FULBERT (talk) 01:34, 10 December 2021 (UTC)

Week5/ Assignment-Citation and Contribution/ Emilyyxx

1. I am working on an article related to my research topic. Virtual workplace has also become one of the most popular topic nowadays. I added one more challenge to it.

2. The Link of Diff.

3. As doing the research, I'm not only getting more understanding on the topic, but also get to know the processes of adding new materials to the article on Wikipedia. --Emilyyxx (talk) 00:51, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Emilyyxx, Nice edit. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 02:26, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 5 / Assignment 5 / EricaLiu1260

Hi Folks, this is my assignment 5.

1. My citation article is "Operation of KFC". Here is the link, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Operations_of_KFC

2. The article mentioned how KFC operates in the world, and this article introduces the detailed operation way in different countries, such as China, Japan, and Australia. But there is an obvious disadvantage on that article is that the data is too old. In order for everyone to understand this issue more objectively and accurately, I think I need to add some quotations.  Meanwhile, I update the total number of KFC restaurants in China, which makes this article more accurate. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Operations_of_KFC&type=revision&diff=1056867577&oldid=1056867006

3. This is the link to my citation: https://www.statista.com/statistics/1004991/china-kfc-restaurant-number-by-operation-mode/ -- EricaLiu1260 (talk) 01:42, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

EricaLiu1260, Nice edit. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 02:27, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6 / Assignment 6 / EricaLiu1260

Hi Folks, this is my assignment 6.

1. My citation article is "Meituan". It is the Chinese version of Uber eats and Cheap Tickets. Here is the link, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Meituan

2. I added the latest data that the novel missed, and I add the latest user data in 2021. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Meituan&type=revision&diff=1056870674&oldid=1053999938

3. I not only learn the specific knowledge on Wikipedia but also learn the meaning of responsibility. When I edit the article, I need to be responsible for it. -- EricaLiu1260 (talk) 02:10, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

EricaLiu1260, Nice addition. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 02:28, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7 / Assignment 7 / EricaLiu1260

Hi Folks, this is my assignment 7.

1. My citation article is "Uber Eats". It is Uber Eats is an online food ordering and delivery platform launched by Uber. My other citation article is "Open Table". OpenTable is an online restaurant-reservation service company

2. The diff link:

Uber Eats: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Uber_Eats&type=revision&diff=1057038037&oldid=1056698595

Open Table: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=OpenTable&type=revision&diff=1057040125&oldid=1045540344

3. I learn the history and profit model for these two software, both of them are quite popular in the US. -- EricaLiu1260 (talk) 02:28, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

EricaLiu1260, Nice edits. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 02:29, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8 / Assignment 8 / EricaLiu1260

Hi Folks, this is my assignment 8.

1. My citation article is "Chick-fil-A". My other citation article is "Jollibee". I added the recent major events for these 2 companies in Wikipedia. And I just recorded the news fairly and did not add any comments.

2. The diff link:

Chick-fil-A: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Chick-fil-A&type=revision&diff=1057154269&oldid=1055560944

Jollibee: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jollibee&type=revision&diff=1057156031&oldid=1055130341

3. I know that Chick-fil-A has many Christian employees, and it stopped donating to LGBTQ organizations. I love Chick-fil-A, however, in my mind, the world is inclusive. Meanwhile, I know the history of Jollibee -- EricaLiu1260 (talk) 20:16, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

EricaLiu1260, Please review the assignment for this week as it involves editing 2 articles. Add that as a reply to here and ping me again and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 21:27, 27 November 2021 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I have already fixed it, here are two diff links. Happy Thanksgiving day! EricaLiu1260 (talk) 06:38, 28 November 2021 (UTC)
EricaLiu1260, These are both fine now. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 02:30, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9 / Assignment 9/ EricaLiu1260

Hi Folks, this is my assignment 9

1. My citation article is "Walmart". My other citation article is "Target". I added some recent news for these 2 companies in Wikipedia.

2. The diff link:

Walmart: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Walmart&type=revision&diff=1057542748&oldid=1056979187

Target: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Target_Corporation&type=revision&diff=1057542226&oldid=1057482096

3. In this process, I broaden my horizon by reading lots of news and Wikipedia, and I also learn how to write in a neutral approach.

4. As for this experience, I would say it is a wonderful journey. I choose the topics and search on the Internet, I love sharing my information and knowledge on the Internet. During this process, I learn lots of knowledge in Wikipedia, and I know how to quickly search for information on the Internet. I tend to continue editing on Wikipedia. --EricaLiu1260 (talk) 07:15, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

EricaLiu1260, Fine on both, and thanks for sharing your experience on this assignment! FULBERT (talk) 02:31, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9/Assignment 9/Huilin826

1. I added one picture into the article "History of Education in China". The article I added from Assignment 8.

2. The link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=History_of_education_in_China&type=revision&diff=1057695065&oldid=1057692684

3. I learned from the process that how to insert the image put the article, and how to find a useful image describing the article content. At first, I was struggling with a high-quality source, because I added some low-quality sources into the article. However, more practice helps me to understand what is high-quality sources and how to use them. It is a long travel for me, a lot of assignments should finish and fix up the problems. Finally, I did it that was happy for me.Huilin826 (talk) 03:27, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Huilin826, Nice final edit and glad the process overall helped; I hope you continue editing! FULBERT (talk) 02:42, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

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Week 6/ Sixth Post / bl2240

1. The article I added was "Tea". It gave us a general picture on tea including its origin, culture and classification. I added the details of tea infusions in the article.

2.Link of the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tea&type=revision&diff=1055343454&oldid=1055037187

3. I learned that in order to broaden our knowledge and view we must read more different types of articles and try to learn knowledge comprehensively as we keep learning. --Bl2240 (talk) 09:21, 15 November 2021 (UTC)

Bl2240, Nice, basic edit. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 03:45, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/Assignment 7/bl2240

1. In the first article, which is Tsingtao brewery, I added some details of my favorite beer, Tsingtao Beer. I added it was predominately sold to Europeans in China. For the second article, I added details on the some description on the Shandong cuisine.

2. Link the diffs 1:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tsingtao_Brewery&type=revision&diff=1057901148&oldid=1056303996 2:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Shandong&type=revision&diff=1057912578&oldid=1057684845

3. I learned that when you edit the wiki, you should always pay extra attention to the source since you want to use only the credible sources. --Bl2240 (talk) 11:27, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

Bl2240, These are both nice edits. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 03:47, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Eighth Post / bl2240

1. For the first article (Cantonese Cuisine), I added a more detailed categorization of the cuisine, which was based on the regional dialect. I also corrected a spelling mistake in the original article. For the second article (Guangdong), I added that the city was the beginning point of the Ancient Maritime Silk Road.

2. Link the diffs. (1) https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Cantonese_cuisine&type=revision&diff=1058028577&oldid=1041135923 (2)https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Guangdong&type=revision&diff=1058032821&oldid=1051329115

3. I learned that Wikipedias is great that you are able to collaborate with people who are interested in the same topic around the world. You can help each other out in getting to know more about the topic, and also help correct each other.--Bl2240 (talk) 01:59, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Bl2240, Both edits are nice and interesting additions. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 03:48, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/ Assignment 6/ Crazytoppp

1. Li-Ning is a sportswear manufacturer that has developed rapidly in China in recent years. Their wikipedia only has histroy before 2013, so I added the company performance reports for 2019 and 2020. 2. Link to diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Li-Ning&diff=1055886168&oldid=1051980840 3. I found that because Wikipedia is updated spontaneously by users, some Wiki entries lack attention and lack updates. Crazytoppp (talk) 12:00, 18 November 2021 (UTC)Crazytoppp (talk) 13:32, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Crazytoppp The sources you used could have been of higher quality, though good enough for now. Current with Week 6. -- FULBERT (talk) 03:52, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/ Assignment 7/ Crazytoppp

1.Article1: I found that there is [citaions needed] tag in the description of Lenovo Legion, so I searched for the relevent news and added the corresponding citiaon. Article2: Lenovo founder Liu Chuanzhi, he has resigned from Legend Holdings in 2019, but the wiki information about him has not been updated 2.Diffs 1:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Lenovo&diff=1056494399&oldid=1054482402 Diffs 2; https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Liu_Chuanzhi&diff=1056495474&oldid=1042497791 3.I found that some wiki information is not updated in time and some information is updated in time but lacks credible citations.

Crazytoppp (talk) 04:04, 22 November 2021 (UTC)Crazytoppp (talk) 13:32, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Crazytoppp These sources you also could have been of higher quality, though good enough for now. Current with Week 7. --- FULBERT (talk) 03:55, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Assignment 8/ Crazytoppp

1. Dong Mingzhu is a well-known female entrepreneur in China. I added to the wiki that she is the seventh most influential woman in the world in Fortune. In 2020, Haier is the world's number one home appliance brand for 12 consecutive years. 2. Diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Dong_Mingzhu&diff=1057704036&oldid=1023424115 Diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Haier&diff=1057704916&oldid=1057553657 3. The Wiki lacks a description of the current situation of some companies. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Crazytoppp (talkcontribs) 04:48, 29 November 2021 (UTC) Crazytoppp (talk) 13:32, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Crazytoppp Both these are nice additions. Current with Week 8. --- FULBERT (talk) 03:56, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 5/ Assignment 5 / Sleep by 11

I've added a new paragraph to this term, adding the latest download data, as well as reviews from the news. Also put in citations from authoritative websites. I learned how to find citations based on the topic I wanted to edit. Also while editing, I saw the contribution of other people's edits and was inspired by their formatting, wording, and expressions. I learned a lot from other people's content. Here's the link of the edit history of article "TikTok":https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=TikTok&action=history Sleep by 11 (talk) 13:35, 18 November 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, This source is more like a blog and not very credible. Can you find a better source for this and ping me again here? FULBERT (talk) 02:58, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
I have changed the cited resource to an article with a DOI. This article contains data to support my content.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=TikTok&diff=1058366682&oldid=1057877288

Sleep by 11 (talk) 03:19, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, Much better. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 03:59, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/ Assignment 6 / Sleep by 11

The content of this entry is outdated, so I have added the current new laws and regulations, the SEC's restrictions on foreign joint venture brokerage firms.

This entry is about the China Securities Regulatory Commission and China's financial markets, so I paid close attention to the impact of laws and regulations in the editing process. Each of my wordings should be in accordance with the laws and regulations, not to cause ambiguity to the reader, and also to conform to the original meaning that the laws and regulations intended to convey.

Here's the link of difference:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Securities_industry_in_China&diff=1055897055&oldid=1029987140 Sleep by 11 (talk) 13:47, 18 November 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, This source is a blog and not very credible. Can you find a better source for this and ping me again here? FULBERT (talk) 02:59, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
This referenced page is the official web page published by the CSRC. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Securities_industry_in_China&diff=1058367801&oldid=1055897055Sleep by 11 (talk) 03:27, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
Sleep by 11, Great! Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 04:00, 5 December 2021 (UTC)