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Week 7/ Assignment 7 / Sleep by 11

I have added this phrase, Meituan, to the various latest figures for 2020, which will go a long way to help readers re-understand the app‘s landscape right now.

When editing this article, I looked at research reports from investment banks and news from the media. I wanted to give the reader an accurate figure and information.

In the second article, Pinduoduo, I have added a description of the current situation of this company. This company has changed its chairman and as a result there are some new initiatives that have a big impact on the strategic direction of the company, so I have added them.

Here are the links: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Meituan&diff=1057759903&oldid=1056870674 https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Pinduoduo&diff=1057761183&oldid=1046960539

Sleep by 11 (talk) 14:31, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, These sources are also not credible in themselves. Can you find higher quality sources such as the ones we used in our course? FULBERT (talk) 03:00, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
For the first article, on Meituan, I added Meituan's official financial results, from which I found all my data support. For the second article on PDD, I added professional research reports to support my content.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Meituan&diff=1058369293&oldid=1057759903 https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Pinduoduo&action=history Sleep by 11 (talk) 05:48, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, These are also now both fine. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 04:01, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Assignment 8 / Sleep by 11

For the first one, BYD Electronic, the introduction to this company was very brief and I gave a detailed description of his main business. And looking for detailed data, as I hope others will not be misled when they see this entry, I found very accurate data through the database of listed companies.

For the second one, Bilibili, I have added objective descriptions to some of the declarative text of features to make this section less of an outdated functional description.

Here are the links: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=BYD_Electronic&diff=1057762507&oldid=1025413170 https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bilibili&diff=1057764484&oldid=1057627153 Sleep by 11 (talk) 14:57, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, I will let these stay, though they are not as credible as we would like. Current for Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 03:02, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
Fine on both. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 04:02, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Update from Assignment 4/ Sleep by 11

Here is the link page of week 4's forum. [[1]]


This is the link to the new article I added a citation to, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sleep%20by%2011/Tencent?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Sleep by 11 (talk) 13:33, 4 November 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, Please edit your post title to include spaces between the week, assignment, and your user name and the " / " and then reply to me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 13:00, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
Done.Sleep by 11 (talk) 14:22, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
Sleep by 11, This linked to something on your own User page, and not to the Tencent article you edited. Can you please reply to this with a link to your edit on the article itself? FULBERT (talk) 00:48, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
I add a citation to this article, which is a different article from week 3. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Changpeng_Zhao&action=history Here is the edit history. Sleep by 11 (talk) 03:25, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
Sleep by 11, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. You have it assigned as an article to review, though since you are making edits on it, that article should be listed as an Assigned Article. Please move it to there and then ping me here and I will review it. FULBERT (talk) 14:54, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
Done, already assigned. Sleep by 11 (talk) 05:44, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
Sleep by 11, Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 21:21, 27 November 2021 (UTC)
Here is the link of diff. Finally understand how this work, thanks for your patience professor. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Changpeng_Zhao&diff=1054280937&oldid=1053913588 Sleep by 11 (talk) 14:07, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
ping Sleep by 11 (talk) 05:47, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
Sleep by 11, I am not convinced this is the best high level, credible source for this, but good enough for now. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 04:04, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/ Assignment 6/ Notkc01

This is Kyle. Hope everyone is doing great! 1. I have found one article about the introduction of NFT(Non-fungible token). NFT is a very meaningful production for the digital world after cryptocurrency. As more and more high-tech productions are introduced to our daily life, we certainly might have another identity "actually" living in the digital world. NFT plays an essential role as we purchase things in the digital world. As everything is digitalized, we need something to actually prove the authentication and the ownership of the products and NFT is the series of numbers assigned to each product we buy that can be retrieved by any buyer to show the ownership, previous price, and authentication. I added one journal article and revised the basic concept of NFT to make it more comprehendible and convincible.

2. Here is the diff link. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Non-fungible_token&diff=1056216323&oldid=1056165499

3. Cyberpunk may not be that far from the world we are living in right now. We surely should be prepared for the exchanges and take our chances. Notkc01 (talk) 13:25, 20 November 2021 (UTC)

Notkc01, Good overall, though next time please add some more content to expand the article along with the citation. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 04:24, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/ Assignment 7 / Wikisun1952

1. When I read an article about automated cars, I found that some materials were not fully described, so I added some content. The second article that I use is system modeling. 2. Link to the diff: Vehicular automation: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Vehicular_automation&type=revision&diff=1056452507&oldid=1056215866 System modeling: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Systems_modeling&type=revision&diff=1056453705&oldid=1042933266 3. Wiki is my main way to search for information that I need, but I learned to understand one thing from many aspects and make sure that these materials are up-to-date. Wikisun1952 (talk) 22:27, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Wikisun1952 Both of these were reverted due to copyright issues. Please revise and ping me here and I will review. See my other comments on writing things in your own words and then citing where you got the idea itself. --- FULBERT (talk) 04:30, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/ Assignment 7/yf2196

1.I added some I parts about dumplings in East Asia and China, which can make people understand the history and traditional names of dumplings more clearly,

I added some traditional content about mooncake in the part of moon cakes. It is an ancient custom about moon cakes. Adding this content can make people better understand the tradition of eating mooncakes.

2.The diff lin:

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Dumpling&diff=prev&oldid=10564785303

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Mooncake&diff=prev&oldid=1056480914


3.I need to change or add some knowledge or content I know, so as to ensure that the knowledge you see can be won or complete.Yifannn (talk) 02:05, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

Yifannn, The first link did not work and the second did not include a citation. Please revise both and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:33, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8 / Assignment 8 / Herry3999

1. I have been suffering from urticaria, so I read some articles about this disease these two days and found that the concept is not comprehensive, so I added. The second article is a very interesting article I found about powdered alcohol.

2. links of the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Aquagenic_urticaria&type=revision&diff=1056482709&oldid=1039766369, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Alcohol_powder&type=revision&diff=1056485053&oldid=1032565788

3. Through this week's homework, I learned how to correctly add citations and query the articles I want to know in different ways. Herry3999 (talk) 03:16, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

Herry3999, These were both deleted due to copyright concerns. FULBERT (talk) 04:34, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7 / Assignment 7 / Jjjjdddd199704

1.I added some details about the city of Hangzhou, because I want more people to have a more comprehensive understanding of my hometown. Among them, West Lake is the most famous attraction in Hangzhou.

2. Hangzhou: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Hangzhou&diff=1056627317&oldid=1056041680

Weat Lake: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=West_Lake&diff=1056628436&oldid=1056097901

3. I think it is very interesting and pleasant to supplement the details of the article.--Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 21:49, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

Jjjjdddd199704, Fix the correct articles assigned in the dashboard and ping me here again and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 17:36, 28 November 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT, Dear professor I fixed.Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 20:01, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
Jjjjdddd199704, Neither of these edits are using credible and reliable sources (see WP:RSPSOURCES). Please revise with higher-level sources, such as we used in our course, and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:36, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Assignment 8/ Jjjjdddd199704

1.As an international metropolis, Shanghai has many film and art festivals. I added a little detail. As the largest Shanghai International Film Festival in Shanghai, I added some descriptions of the number of people

2. Shanghai: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Shanghai&diff=1056629670&oldid=1055905682

Shanghai International Film Festival: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Shanghai_International_Film_Festival&diff=1056630712&oldid=1051974982

3. I found that adding citations or materials can enhance persuasiveness and allow us to understand a certain thing or story more comprehensively.--Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 22:06, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

Jjjjdddd199704, I would ordinarily revert both of your edits with a message similar to: "The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE." Please find and cite more reliable sources and then ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 17:38, 28 November 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT,Dear professor I put the right source now.

Shanghai: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Shanghai&diff=1057808133&oldid=1057596479 Shanghai International Film Festival: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Shanghai_International_Film_Festival&diff=1057809593&oldid=1057808417 Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 20:20, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Jjjjdddd199704, Neither of these edits are using credible and reliable sources (see WP:RSPSOURCES). Please revise with higher-level sources, such as we used in our course, and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:39, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week6 / assignment 6/ sunnydayreading

Hi, I added a citation for rPET(Recycled polyethylene terephthalate plastic). This is a B grade article which still needs improvement. I found a citation from ScienceDirect that can prove the genus Nocardia can degrade PET with an esterase enzyme. Here is a link to show diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Polyethylene_terephthalate&diff=1057659297&oldid=1049252865 . I have learned how to find a citation wisely. When we are looking for a citation, we need to choose a high quality citation. Therefore, it can be a good idea to search in the academic database or scientific research website.

Best, Sunnydayreading (talk) 23:23, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Sunnydayreading, Nice addition. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 04:42, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 5/Assignment 5/Chenjshi

1. I am very interested in the electric vehicle industry. I found that the electric vehicle industry is developing rapidly, so I chose this article. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Electric_vehicle_industry_in_China 2. This is the new information I have added. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Electric_vehicle_industry_in_China&type=revision&diff=1057060584&oldid=1056630719 3. The information I have added can give you a better understanding of China's electric vehicle industry. At the same time, I also learned a lot of information about electric vehicles.Chenjshi (talk) 06:03, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Chenjshi, Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 02:16, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Hello FULBERT, here is my diff link https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Electric_vehicle_industry_in_China&type=revision&diff=1057060584&oldid=1056630719Chenjshi (talk) 02:31, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Chenjshi, Nice addition. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 04:46, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 5/Assignment 5/Katxzhang

1. I added two sources, one about some other awards the movie Back To 1942 has won, the other is an extra review of the movie. 2. The link of difference is here: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Back_to_1942&type=revision&diff=1057070062&oldid=1043954318 3. From the article I learned the international impact of this movie. The movie vividly portrayed the major famine that struck Henan, China in 1942. The reviews are not all good, in fact, there are a lot of critics I haven't noticed while watching the movie. I learned that this type of movie can be watched to relive the history but also need to be evaluated carefully like the rest of the movie. By editing the article, I learned to use blockquote and add references to a template.Katxzhang (talk) 08:26, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang, Nice addition. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 04:48, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/Assignment 6/Katxzhang

1. I added the fact claimed that the lack of minority professions is a long-stressed issue in the law enforcement department of America. 2. Link of difference: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Law_enforcement&type=revision&diff=1057080871&oldid=1051081341 3. What I have learned is that it is a game-changer situation already that more corners of the world are taking minority rights seriously and starting to make a difference. Individuals like us should contribute to the subject in our own way which will result in an even brighter and more efficient path to a better future.Katxzhang (talk) 10:02, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang, Nice addition. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 04:49, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

/* Week6 / Assignment 6 / Cloi929 */

1. This article talks about Moutai's history, current situation, brewing methods and others' views on Moutai. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Maotai&diff=1057079477&oldid=1033001512 3. When checked the information. I found that Moutai is only brewed with sorghum and water. I thought there were other materials. That surprised me.Cloi929 (talk) 09:46, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Cloi929, Nice addition. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 04:52, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

week8/assignment 8/ Amber MWY

  1. I find two articles about digital marketing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Digital_marketing. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/TikTok.
  2. Link dif:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Digital_marketing&type=revision&diff=1057116680&oldid=1057010821. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=TikTok&type=revision&diff=1057578746&oldid=1057204847
  3. I add another topic for digital marketing that is tourism marketing. That is a very interesting topic and we can use social media to record the travel. and add a sentence for TikTok--Amber MWY (talk) 15:34, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
    Amber MWY, I think both of these are a bit choppy and do not clearly add to the flow of the article, though other editors have let them remain so good enough for now. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 04:57, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week6/Assignment6/Jw6740

1. I found an S-level article named "E-commerce payment system" since it closely related to the topic of my research paper. When I was reviewing the article, I found there is no reference under the section "methods of online payment". Therefore, I found a high-quality journal article talks about digital payment systems and added it to this wiki article with one description sentence.

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=E-commerce_payment_system&diff=prev&oldid=1057572478

3. What I learned from this process is that a high-quality article must have a lot of references to support its statements. Also, each statement should have an in-text citation to show evidence. Jw6740 (talk) 12:04, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Jw6740, Nice addition. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 05:07, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week7/Assignment7/Jw6740

1. The two articles I found are "Food delivery" and "Home shopping" which are both related to the influences that e-commerce brings to human lives. Fo the "Food delivery", I found the content under the "delivery software service" is focused on the ordering system in the restaurant instead of food delivery, so I added the influence of food delivery application with supportive reference. For the other article, I added the market trend ad benefits of home shopping with two sentences and high-quality references.

2. Link to diff:

food delivery: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Food_delivery&diff=1057584658&oldid=1056740007

Home shopping: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Home_shopping&diff=1057587233&oldid=1050805377

3. What I learned from this process is that e-commerce does contribute to lots of retailing areas such as the food, clothes, and beauty product industries. For Wikipedia, I am gradually familiar with reviewing the articles and adding references. Jw6740 (talk) 14:30, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Jw6740, Nice additions. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 05:08, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/ Assignment 6/ Tzc0725

Summary of the cited article:

The COVID-19 (coronavirus) pandemic is an ongoing global pandemic of coronavirus disease caused by a severe acute respiratory syndrome named coronavirus 2 (SARS-CoV-2). It was first identified in Wuhan of China in 2019 and then spread over the world. This pandemic heavily influenced the life and livelihood of the people globally. A close to five million people across the world have died and a few million are infected to date. A number of variants of this virus have already hit the world. There is no specific, effective cure or treatment for COVID-19 disease caused by the SARS-CoV-2 virus. This makes supportive care the cornerstone to manage COVID-19. The supportive care includes oxygen support, fluid therapy, prone positioning for the patients as needed, treatment to relieve symptoms, and devices or medications to support the affected organs of the patients. The preventive measures for COVID-19 include getting vaccinated, wearing a mask in public, maintaining social distancing, avoiding crowds, ventilating all the indoor spaces, and more. The global healthcare industry has experienced a huge demand for medical support systems, devices, medications, and other preventive care in the pandemic. I've added the number of vaccines given for COVID-19 as of 11/29/2021 according to Google News.

Link to the diff of article citation added:

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Vaccine&diff=prev&oldid=1057716509

Things I have learned:

This week, I have learned about the COVID-19 pandemic and its vaccines. I also learned how this pandemic made SMEs seize digital transformation opportunities to ensure their survival by linking with the previously cited article in week 5.

Tzc0725 (talk) 07:00, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Tzc0725, Per the assignment, please add a sentence or two to each of your edits so we see what you are adding from your citations. Also, the source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Please find and cite a more reliable source and then ping me again here when done. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 05:23, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/ Assignment 7/ Tzc0725

Selected articles:

Article 1) Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on retail. Citation: Wikipedia.org. (2021). Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on retail. Retrieved on 22nd October 2021 from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Impact_of_the_COVID-19_pandemic_on_retail

Article 2) Economic impact of the COVID-19 pandemic. Citation: Wikipedia.org. (2021). The economic impact of the COVID-19 pandemic. Retrieved on 22nd October 2021 from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Economic_impact_of_the_COVID-19_pandemic


Summary of the cited article:

Article 1: The coronavirus pandemic has taken a very sharp economic toll on the global retail industry by forcing many shopping centers and retailers to close their operations for months as a result of mandated orders for lockdowns or 'stay-at-home’. This closure boosted the online retailers’ sales by making consumers look for alternative options to shop.

Article 2: E-commerce sites have experienced huge growth during COVID-19 due to retailers moving to these sites to continue their operations. Consumers' shopping behavior related to online purchases had suddenly doubled compared to the year before the pandemic hit. Further, consumers' behavior towards online purchase of healthcare products and services led some major e-commerce platforms like Pinduoduo and Sunning.com to make a promise to keep the prices of their healthcare products stable.

Link to the diff of article citation added

Article 1: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Impact_of_the_COVID-19_pandemic_on_retail&diff=prev&oldid=1057717180

Article 2: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Economic_impact_of_the_COVID-19_pandemic&diff=prev&oldid=1057717514 Things I have learned

From this week I have learned about the impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on the retail industry and e-commerce sites that altogether significantly impacted the global economy. Tzc0725 (talk) 07:07, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Tzc0725, I agree with the editor in the first article who reverted your addition, though the second one was solid. OK for now. Current for Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 05:25, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 5/ Assignment 5/ Tzc0725

What I Did and What I Learned

Summary of the cited article:

Small and medium-sized enterprises, abbreviated as SMEs are businesses that operate with a limited number of personnel. SMEs are quite important for social and economic reasons and thus, these sectors play an important role in generating employment. Due to the size of SMEs, they are highly influenced by their CEO(s) (Chief Executive Officer) who often acts as the founders, owners, as well as manager of an SME. The duties and responsibilities of the CEO in SMEs are difficult but mirror the CEOs of large companies. SMEs provide wheels to a nation, mainly developing nations, to drive economic efficiency and employment. SMEs play a crucial role in large enterprises’ supplier networks. An SME stands as a solution to the economic problems like abuse and misuse of economic power, mass unemployment, of the mid-20th century. The selected Wikipedia article has covered discussion on a number of countries accepting and using SMEs for their economic development and growth.


Link to the diff of article citation added:

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Small_and_medium-sized_enterprises&diff=prev&oldid=1057715571


Things I have learned:

From this week, I have learned about SMEs and their impact on the economy as well as in extending large enterprises’ supplier networks.

Tzc0725 (talk) 06:49, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Tzc0725, Nice addition. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 05:26, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Assignment 8/ Tzc0725

Selected articles:

Article 1) Pharmaceutical industry. Citation: Wikipedia.org. (2021). Pharmaceutical industry. Retrieved on 22nd October 2021 from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pharmaceutical_industry

Article 2) Medical device. Citation: Wikipedia.org. (2021). Medical device. Retrieved on 22nd October 2021 from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Economic_impact_of_the_COVID-19_pandemic

Summary of the cited article:

Article 1: The pharmaceutical industry is engaged in discovering, developing, producing, and marketing drugs to use by patients as medications to vaccinate them, cure them, or alleviate symptoms. This industry has grown over the decades and extended its arms to serve people suffering from health issues.

Article 2: Medical devices are used for medical purposes to diagnose diseases and treat patients. There are several categories of medical devices across the world. These devices are used at home, and hospitals to provide clinical care and assistance to patients.

Link to the diff of article citation added

Article 1: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Pharmaceutical_industry&diff=prev&oldid=1057717979

Article 2: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Economic_impact_of_the_COVID-19_pandemic&diff=prev&oldid=1057718347

Things I have learned

From this week, I have learned about the link between the pharmaceutical industry a large part of which is involved in producing medical devices.

Tzc0725 (talk) 07:17, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Tzc0725, These should have been two different articles, though one of these you edited before. Please find an additional one to edit and ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 05:28, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6 / Assignment 6 / RaymondZqiu

Hi everyone. This is Raymond. Here is my assignment 6. 1. Lanzhou is my hometown and I have strong feelings about it. As a result, I assigned Lanzhou University as my article and added its 2020 ARWU rank. Here is the link to my article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lanzhou_University 2.Diff page: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Lanzhou_University&type=revision&diff=1057979692&oldid=1054191202 3. During this process, I realize that comparison is important when we introduce some topic. Take Lanzhou University as an example, its increasing rank from different years clearly shows its tendency and makes readers know about its academic level. --RaymondZqiu (talk) 19:45, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

RaymondZqiu, Nice addition. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 05:31, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7 / Assignment 7 / RaymondZqiu

Hi, this is Raymond. 1. The first article I assigned is Dunhuang. I added a citation of its latest economic data. The second is Pinduoduo and I cited for its annual active buyers in 2021. 2. Here are the diff pages: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Dunhuang&type=revision&diff=1058379511&oldid=1054647082 https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Pinduoduo&type=revision&diff=1058378722&oldid=1057761183 3. I really felt a sense of achievement and excitement when I updated the information on Wiki.--RaymondZqiu (talk) 05:03, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

RaymondZqiu, These are both fine. Week 7 is current. FULBERT (talk) 05:33, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8 / Assignment 8 / RaymondZqiu

1. The first article I assigned is Nantong and I added some updated information about Nantong Welfare Institution. The second article is China Construction Bank and I added its rank in 2021. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Nantong&type=revision&diff=1058383246&oldid=1058075305 https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=China_Construction_Bank&type=revision&diff=1058388876&oldid=1058212203 3. During this process, I realize lots of information needs to be updated and I am proud of what I have contributed.--RaymondZqiu (talk) 06:17, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

RaymondZqiu, Nice additions to these two articles. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 05:34, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9 / Assignment 9 / Jjjjdddd199704

1. My citation article is "Great Wall of China". My other citation article is "Yonghe Temple". I added a description of these two Chinese cultural heritages.

2. The diff link:

Yonghe Temple: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Yonghe_Temple&diff=1058184084&oldid=1056271579

Forbidden City: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Forbidden_City&diff=1058143874&oldid=1055863784

3. In this process, I found that adding citation can give readers a more comprehensive understanding of a thing.

4. We often use Wikipedia in our daily lives, but this is my first time editing it. This feeling is very wonderful, which allows me to share the information and knowledge I have learned. At the same time I also learned a lot of benefits of citation.---Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 00:00, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Jjjjdddd199704, The first edit you made did not have a credible and reliable source. Please edit that one more and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 05:36, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT, I changed the first edit with a credible and reliable source

Yonghe Temple: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Yonghe_Temple&diff=1058723957&oldid=1058723884 ---Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 05:59, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Jjjjdddd199704, This is still not a credible and reliable source, it is for a tourist company. Use a source similar to the high-level ones we use in class. Ping me when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 06:02, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9/ Assignment 9/ TFMonk19970531

1. the first article is about deadlift, I add some benefits of doing deadlift. the second article is about bench press, I add some information about how bench press help increase performance in sports.

2. the first diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Deadlift&type=revision&diff=1058727563&oldid=1055584974 the second diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bench_press&type=revision&diff=1058728535&oldid=1050871276

3. I always have interests in body-building and exercise. It is exciting to let more people see its benefits. --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 06:52, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Both of the journals you used have had issues with credibility and reliability, but ok for now as there is no clear consensus on them. Week 9 also includes some reflection on the overall assignment. Ping me when you add that. FULBERT (talk) 14:40, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/ Assignment 7/ Notkc01

Hi guys, hope everyone had a good thanksgiving. Here is my assignment 7.

1. I have followed metaverse for a while as this is a hot topic these days for the financial technology field. I read the topic of Metaverse on Wiki and expanded its utilization of Nike's recent action in its Utilization section. Besides technology giants, more and more big companies are stepping into the metaverse and trying to get ahead of others. The second article I found is the introduction to Anta sports. I added more information about its origin with the citation taken from its official website.

2. Link to diff:

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Metaverse&diff=1057215108&oldid=1056844183
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Metaverse&diff=1057215108&oldid=1056844183

3. Editing articles on Wiki is definitely a great learning process for me to improve my writing and it also provides me with another angle reading those articles. Notkc01 (talk) 11:44, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Notkc01, These should be for two different articles. Please add a second one and ping me and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:26, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT Hi Professor, sorry for the confusion. I must mistakenly paste the same address for my two articles. Here is the link diff for my second article. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Anta_Sports&diff=1057569934&oldid=1057481355. I added one citation about the background of the company to increase the credibility and extended the stock code for more information. Notkc01 (talk) 05:21, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Notkc01, Per the assignment, be sure to provide a sentence or two to express each of your contributions in context, and demonstrate how they add to the knowledge in the article. Ping me when you add some additional content to your citation and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 05:57, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT Please check the new link-diff for the Anta-sports article. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Anta_Sports&diff=1058725039&oldid=1057569934. For the Metaverse article, I actually added one sentence in the virtual reality section about Nike's newest movement toward Metaverse. Notkc01 (talk) 06:53, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Notkc01, Fine on both. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 14:41, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Assignment 8/ Notkc01

1. For assignment 8, I decided to step my feet into the health field not only because I am a gym enthusiast but also I am interested in health and nutrition. Anaerobic exercise and overtraining and interrelated. I checked both articles and they all have explained the topic thoroughly. I edited one sentence of each topic to increase the readability and also inserted related citations to help increase the credibility of certain points in both articles.

2. Link to diff

Anaerobic exercise: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Anaerobic_exercise&diff=1057573258&oldid=1056985048
Overtraining: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Overtraining&diff=1057573561&oldid=1056897382

3. I am very glad that I am able to help edit the topics that I have a passion for. Editing from Wiki has given me a deeper understanding of those topics. Notkc01 (talk) 12:20, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Notkc01, Please review the assignment, "Be sure to provide a sentence or two to express each of your contributions in context, and demonstrate how they add to the knowledge in the article." Add and ping me again and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:27, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT For the anaerobic exercise article, the correct explanation of the functionality of the aerobic system. The original sentence did not clarify that aerobic actually help store fuel in the body to prepare for the next exercise. I also added the citation of related studies to be convincible. For the overtraining article, I added one treatment to deal with overtraining. The original treatment section was ambiguous about cutting the aspects of overall training. I specified the volume and the intensity that can be considered to reduce when people experience overtraining. Notkc01 (talk) 05:20, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Notkc01, You only added a citation without adding information that helps us see how you improved the article. What you explained here is fine, though say something in the article that demonstrates how you added to it. Ping me when you add some additional content to your citation and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 05:59, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT please check the new link-diff of the two articles.
Anaerobic exercise: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Anaerobic_exercise&diff=1058726508&oldid=1057573258
Overtraining: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Overtraining&diff=1058727217&oldid=1057573561 Notkc01 (talk) 06:55, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Notkc01, Fine on both. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 14:42, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9/ Assignment 9/yf2196

1. Because I just applied for the real world Ernst & Young course for the next semester, I assigned the first article about Ernst & Young's information. The second article is about the company that I used to intern. I added the ranking of Haitong Securities' global market capitalization.

2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ernst_%26_Young&diff=prev&oldid=1058736733

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Haitong_Securities&diff=prev&oldid=1058737311


3. During this process, I realized that a lot of information needs to be updated, and I also knew how to add references to the materials.Yifannn (talk) 08:41, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Yifannn, Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 14:46, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Assignment 8/yf2196

1. This time I chose two landmark attractions or architectural attractions in Shanghai, China for modification.

2. Difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Tianzifang&diff=prev&oldid=1058732819 https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Oriental_Pearl_Tower&diff=prev&oldid=1058732076

3. Through this week's homework, I know that when adding content, I should look for some high-quality references for research and addition.Yifannn (talk) 08:00, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Yifannn, These were not to credible and reliable sources, so I reverted one and another editor reverted another. Please use the same quality of sources as we use in our course. Ping me when revised. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:49, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9/ Assignment 9/ Notkc01

1. For my bonus assignment, I want to extend the health topic to stretching and aerobic exercise. Even though people may not be able to go to the gym and lift weights regularly, they perform aerobic exercise every day as walking. Both articles illustrated the topics well and I backed up some points with my citation to help increase the reliability.

2. Link to diff:

stretching：https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Stretching&diff=1057578224&oldid=1056895982
aerobic exercise： https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Aerobic_exercise&diff=1057578572&oldid=1056889319

3. The whole journey of editing has changed the way I use Wiki and I am sure that I will keep following up on the articles that I have assigned and continue to contribute on Wiki. Notkc01 (talk) 13:08, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Notkc01, Please revise per my last comment and ping me again. FULBERT (talk) 04:28, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT Hi Professor, I have replied to all the comments. Please let me know if there is any question. Thank you! Notkc01 (talk) 05:23, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Notkc01, Please add 1-2 sentences plus a citation to each of the articles you edit. Ping me here when you make these additions. FULBERT (talk) 05:59, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT, Please check the new link diff for the two articles.
stretching：https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Stretching&diff=1058727926&oldid=1057578224
aerobic exercise: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Aerobic_exercise&diff=1058728431&oldid=1058265439 Notkc01 (talk) 06:57, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Notkc01, Please provide reflection on the overall assignment per the instructions for Week 9 and ping me when done. FULBERT (talk) 14:43, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT For the stretching article, I added one sentence to another way of performing Ballistic stretching that the article did not touch on. For the aerobic exercise article, I added a short paragraph to explain the possibility of using aerobic exercises to lose fat. The original conclusion made by the article was arbitrary and did not consider the level of experience of all potential practitioners. For the process of editing, I learned that we should think laterally especially when we are trying to make a conclusion or advice to readers. The arbitrary conclusions or conclusions without citations backed up can be misleading and unreliable. For the overall reflection with this Wikipedia extra credit assignment, I definitely have more experience on editing Wikipedia and truly explored the overall functionality of Wikipedia. I believe I will continue to follow topics that I am interested in on Wikipedia and provide edits to those articles to improve my writing and the overall platform. Notkc01 (talk) 15:14, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Notkc01 Thanks for sharing this. Good to hear you found this a useful experience. Current with Week 9. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:00, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/Assignment 7/Katxzhang

1. The citation I added is about the rising demand for Asian Americans to move to or want to live in Long Island City.


2. Difference of editing: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Asian_Americans_in_New_York_City&type=revision&diff=1057089554&oldid=1043045228


3. I have learned some fun facts about Asian Americans' living situation in New York City, I then get to compare it with mine and got an interesting perspective on Asians and Asian Americans' different mindsets.Katxzhang (talk) 11:34, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang, This week should include edits to 2 articles. Please add what is missing and ping me again here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:50, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT Sorry for the confusion, here is my 2nd article of week 7:

1. The citation I put in is an extra reference on studies of dance and mental health, specifically Hip Pop dance and Social-cognitive ability. It enriched the fact that dance is beneficial to dancers' higher performance in many other aspects.

2. Difference comparison: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Dance_and_health&type=revision&diff=1057161750&oldid=1057135524

3. Due to my interest in street dancing, I looked up the relevant topics, after editing I learned that dancing can do more than bring joy and a sense of achievement, it actually helps with better performance in cognitive behaviors like mental rotation (another new word I've learned), and eventually benefit a dancer's STEM skills. It encouraged me to stick to dancing for the long-term improvement of life.Katxzhang (talk) 17:21, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang These are fine. Current with Week 7. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:03, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9/ Assignment 9/Katxzhang

1. I added an image to support original content.

2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=The_Walt_Disney_Company&action=history

3. I learned more about Walt Disney Company, its recent innovation, and solution to business decline during the pandemic age.

4. The Wikipedia editing was an incredible experience for me. Frankly, I was not a big fan in the first few weeks, but I started putting in more effort and realize it did make me learn in the areas I want to learn; After 9 weeks of editing, I have learned some techniques to research more efficiently and fluently. I also became more patient at researching in different directions. I learned to always summarize after research, to make up my mind on the next research topic, and make adjustments to what I already had; I will keep editing on Wiki as long as I have the time so that it reminds me of the things that matter to me.Katxzhang (talk) 01:20, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang, This week should include edits to 2 articles. Please add what is missing and ping me again here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:51, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT Sorry professor, I didn't clarify that I added a picture here, I thought we only need to do that to one article?Katxzhang (talk) 17:27, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Katxzhang, You did not add the diff nor assign it in the dashboard first. FULBERT (talk) 18:06, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
FULBERTSorry I put the wrong link, the difference of version link is:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=The_Walt_Disney_Company&type=revision&diff=1058026179&oldid=1056953767

I assigned it as well, the one name 'the Walt Disney Company'. Thank you!Katxzhang (talk) 18:15, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week7/Assignment7/ Cloi929

1. I choose Changchun with my article. Because Changchun is my hometown. And I add more information about Badabu which is Eight Grand Ministries. And my elementary school is the Education Ministry. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Changchun&diff=1058733568&oldid=1058544645 2. The second article I choose Xiaohongshu, this is my This is my favorite mobile phone App! I browse it every day. It can even be said that I cannot do without it. There is no information you can't find in it. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Xiaohongshu&diff=1058736432&oldid=1056382048 I think it makes me feel very happy to let more people see more information. Whether it’s the knowledge of my hometown or the knowledge of my favorite App. --Cloi929 (talk) 23:00, 5 December 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cloi929 (talk • contribs) 08:42, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Cloi929 Please be sure to sign your posts. Sign as a reply and I will review. --- FULBERT (talk) 17:56, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

This week's article for improvement (week 49, 2021)

Bushtits eating suet, which is usable as a bird food, from a bird feeder
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Week 5/ Assignment 5/ SABA90S

Hi everyone, I have worked on the American Cruise Line article. I added more description and definition about modern river cruise. Here is the link of the article. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/American_Cruise_Lines And this is the diff link to this article: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=American_Cruise_Lines&diff=prev&oldid=1055070349. --SABA90S (talk) 12:06, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

SABA90S, Nice edit. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 16:27, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/ Assignment 6/ SABA90S

Hi everyone, I have worked on the Startup India article. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Startup_India I added a couple of sentences about the entrepreneurship and the government role on the government's role paragraph. Below is the diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Startup_India&diff=1056787025&oldid=1051278298. --SABA90S (talk) 12:10, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

SABA90S, Nice edit. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 16:28, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/ Assignment 7/ SABA90S

Hi everyone, The first article I have worked on, is the Business process outsourcing in the Philippine article. I added some explanation about outsourcing under the third party topic. Here is the link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business_process_outsourcing_in_the_Philippines Here is the diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Business_process_outsourcing_in_the_Philippines&diff=1056791197&oldid=1026461905. --SABA90S (talk) 12:14, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

The second article I have worked on is the Legal outsourcing. I added a couple of sentences about the outsourcing and its definition. Here is the link to the article. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Legal_outsourcing And below is the link of diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Legal_outsourcing&diff=1056798722&oldid=1051448831. --SABA90S (talk) 12:14, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

SABA90S, Both of these edits are fine. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 16:30, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Assignment 8/ SABA90S

Hi everyone, The article I edited is the Entrepreneurship ecosystem. I added a couple of sentences about the entrepreneurship and different ideas about the its relationship with job market. Here is the link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Entrepreneurship_ecosystem Below is the diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Entrepreneurship_ecosystem&diff=1056964366&oldid=1048314811. --SABA90S (talk) 12:18, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

SABA90S, This week involves editing two articles. Can you reply here with the diff to the second new article you are editing? Thank you. FULBERT (talk) 16:31, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9/ Assignment 9/ SABA90S

Hi everyone, I modified an article about Colombian coffee. The article name is Coffee production in Colombia. I added an image about the best coffee that I took in Bogota, Colombia in my trip to this country couple of weeks ago. Here is the link of the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Coffee_production_in_Colombia And this the diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Coffee_production_in_Colombia&diff=1056970108&oldid=1048329018. --SABA90S (talk) 12:22, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

SABA90S, Wikipedia usually avoids claims that things are better than others as that is highly subjective, though the image you took and uploaded is a nice addition. Please also share your reflections on the assignment and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 18:30, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/Assignment 8/Katxzhang

1. What I did in this article is add a testified example that emotional damage was made to students because of the neglect of teachers on the relevant issue.

2. Comparison: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=School_climate&type=revision&diff=1057625462&oldid=1015200399

3. I learned that schools should care more about students' general wellbeing rather than focusing on academic progress. Because ample research has proved that school climate can eventually impact the academic performance of students, lead to fewer dropouts, which will raise an institution's reputation in the long run. A good school vibe really can make a difference, as it is never meant to be a place for students to suffer. I also learned to research better by filtering articles from different angles then looking into details of a few selected ones.Katxzhang (talk) 20:00, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang, This week should include edits to 2 articles. Please add what is missing and ping me again here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:51, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT Sorry, here is the other article of week 8:

1. In this week's article, I added a new sentence to introduce and conclude the meaning of the issue discussed in the paragraph.

2. Comparison: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Social_aspects_of_television&type=revision&diff=1057174763&oldid=1050974371

3. The article I found is called "Social Aspects and Television". I added the session about gender and television. Looking at the golden time television series' revolution, female characters used to have several certain stereotypes, for example, there used to be many characters as desperate wives or gullible teenagers, which, the characters are fine for sure, what is not okay it trying to send the idea that women are powerless and incapable of control their own life. Through this editing, I learned the gradual yet significant changes in the television industry, where feminism is able to be spread across the world to alter many females' minds that they are within the right to speak for themselves, or that they are weak. It is thriving and breathtaking.Katxzhang (talk) 17:24, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang, Please assign this article in the dashboard and then ping me again here. FULBERT (talk) 18:06, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
FULBERTSorry, it's assigned now:)Katxzhang (talk) 18:09, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Katxzhang, Both of these edits are fine. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 18:47, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
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