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ANCAT (Andros Conservancy & Trust Bahamas)[edit]

John.bond954 (talk) 02:34, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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Regine (album)[edit]

Greetings! I just created an article for the self-titled album Regine of Filipino artist/singer Regine Velasquez. Could someone please review the template. Thank you very much in advance. :)


Rovheel (talk) 11:07, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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User:Louieene/Surefoot American International School[edit]

I need help. I don't know if this is good enough to go on wikipedia. How do I unblock my page? It isn't moving to the main wikipedia page. Please help me.


louis (talk) 11:34, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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  • You cannot move an article until you have been autoconfirmed - that happens 4 days after you have registered, but you also need to have made at least 10 edits (aka contributions). It isn't blocked, you just need to wait a while longer.
  • In the meantime, the article needs more work before it meets Wikipedia quality standards. You need to address the layout, and content style. You also need to provide some references to support the article.
  • As you are writing about a school, please also read WP:LOCAL for info on creating articles on such places.
  • You need to maintain a neutral point of view and remain objective - descriptions such as:
    • The facilities are well built and properly managed.
    • SAIS is a nice place for children from all over the world. They can learn new things.
    • They can have good friends. They can stay happy.
    • Surefoot American International School should be rated as a three star school on International standards.
    • SAIS is a good school.

...are biased opinions, not information. We need to know what the school "is" rated at, not what it "should" be rated at, foe example. If it is a "good school" what can prove that - references to independent reports or newspaper articles are needed for a claim such as this.


Cheers, Ma®©usBritish [talk] 17:02, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Fiona Woolf[edit]

I would really appreciate some general feedback on the article, and to remove the 'new article' template from it! Thanks.

Sheenak (talk) 14:02, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Needs more referencing from third party, independent, reliable sources. At the moment, most of your sources are lists of staff/members which are trivial/routine business articles. You need more coverage to account for her notability, eg newspaper articles (not press releases), or anything not self-published that speaks about her more in-depth than just her role in an organisation. See WP:BLP also, for more info.

Cheers, Ma®©usBritish [talk] 16:28, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shamsquader/Bohemian_band[edit]

I have written this article on my band Bohemian. This is my first article for Wikipedia. Would someone please review it? Thanks.

Shamsquader (talk) 17:37, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Kamal Uddin (singer)[edit]

This article about a Nasheed artist Kamal Uddin (singer) (similar to other Nasheed artists such as Nazeel Azami) was previously deleted. However it has now been rewritten from a NPOV removing the Fancruft content and including notable content from reliable sources. Request a review and feedback for any amendments needed, regards.


Tanbircdq (talk) 18:05, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Sharing Please add feature to share articles on facebook, Google+ and twitter,[edit]

Please add feature to share articles on facebook, Google+ and twitter,

115.69.153.38 (talk) 19:08, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • This is not the place to request features for wiki, it is for reviewing articles. Please see Village Pump where such things are discussed. As far as I know, consensus is against adding social sharing features, but things may change one day. Ma®©usBritish [talk] 20:14, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jaykaynone/Guiye_Frayo[edit]

Hi there!

Last week I posted this article by mistake and it was speadily deleted, I contested it because I didn't realised that it had been posted incomplete. As this is my first article I didn't save all the information and everythig got messed up. I created the article again under my user space and added all the references required to show the subject is notable (that were not present in the article I posted last week). I've been following the band for sometime now, I put a lot of effort to do the research.I wanted you to check if now the article is complete, it has enough relevance, it is neutral and it has been written according to the guidelines to be moved to live. The user that deleted it the first time was Amatulic (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amatulic), I would like him to check this now too.

I really apologise for not being careful enough at the time I created the article the first time.


Jaykaynone (talk) 20:30, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

 Done - moved to article space. --Orange Mike | Talk 21:12, 8 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

lee annendale correctional institution[edit]

You might want to mention in the Lee Annendale Correctional Institution article that the jail/prison scenes in "My Cousin Vinny" were filmed there.


108.12.173.198 (talk) 01:39, 6 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done There is no article by that name or anything close to it. --Orange Mike | Talk 21:10, 8 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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