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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 23:39, 30 December 2018 (UTC)

Loch Maree Hotel botulism poisoning

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Loch Maree Hotel
Loch Maree Hotel

Created by Philafrenzy (talk), Whispyhistory (talk), and Edwardx (talk). Nominated by Philafrenzy (talk) at 22:11, 20 November 2018 (UTC).

  • - Length and date check, QPQ is pending, Image is PD-Old. For the cite, while this being the first fatal outbreak is mentioned in the lead I do not see a cite for it in the article. Also, there is a clarification needed tag for an unclear sentence and Earwigs flags some close paraphrasing. Mifter (talk) 00:44, 21 November 2018 (UTC)
@Mifter: All done I think. I changed fatal to recorded in the hook as there may well have been earlier unrecognised cases in the U.K. Philafrenzy (talk) 08:44, 21 November 2018 (UTC)
Thanks! Still need the QPQ though. Best, Mifter (talk) 04:24, 22 November 2018 (UTC)
@Mifter:. QPQ done. Let me know if an further suggestions and thank you for persevering. Whispyhistory (talk) 12:32, 23 November 2018 (UTC)
- Looks good to me. Best, Mifter (talk) 22:27, 23 November 2018 (UTC)