Template:Did you know nominations/Raffaele Contigiani

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:42, 25 May 2019 (UTC)

Raffaele Contigiani[edit]

Hotel du Lac, Tunis
Hotel du Lac, Tunis

Created by Philafrenzy (talk), Edwardx (talk), and Whispyhistory (talk). Nominated by Philafrenzy (talk) at 13:43, 15 April 2019 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: No - Source needs to be moved up to the end of the sentence with the hook.
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: No - The BBC source says that this claim comes from an online petition, and presents evidence that contradicts it being the direct inspiration. Perhaps the hook should say that it was "rumored to be the inspiration for the sandcrawler".
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: The hook needs a little work, but I would love to see this run on Star Wars Day (May 4th). SounderBruce 00:09, 16 April 2019 (UTC)

  • Added a couple of Alts and moved the ref in article. Philafrenzy (talk) 16:38, 16 April 2019 (UTC)
    • Approving a modified version of ALT1. The others have awkward wording and pacing. SounderBruce 21:20, 23 April 2019 (UTC)