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List of awards and nominations received by Daddy Yankee

I've listed this article for peer review because I want other Wikipedians to express their views about my article in order to nominate it for a Featured list criteria.

Thanks, Brankestein (talk) 05:07, 8 March 2017 (UTC)

Comments

• The lead is very long and too detailed in my opinion. You don't even mention awards until the last paragraph. I think the entire second paragraph can be removed and the rest should be shortened. The lead should discuss his career and awards he has won, not his life story. Talk about his albums and films and weave some awards he has won into that. This list also shouldn't focus on record sales but awards instead.
• American Society of Composers, Authors and Publishers section cites no sources.
• Same with Broadcast Music, Inc. Latin Music Awards.
• You mention that International Casandra is a special award twice but don't say what it means.
• Grammy Awards section: "Daddy Yankee received no awards from one nominations." One "s" too many.
• Premios 40 Principales América section doesn't cite any sources.
• Same with MTV Video Music Awards and MTV Video Music Awards Japan.
• You don't need to mention that Twentieth Anniversary Award is a special awards twice.
• Premios People en Español section cites no sources.
• Same with Premios Oye! and Premios Tu Mundo section.
• "Presencia Latina is Harvard's Latino and Latin American Cultural Show, established and officially recognized by Harvard University in October 2002." This is a bit redundant.
• Also, you don't need to note special awards.
• Society of European Stage Authors and Composers Latina Awards section cites no sources.
• The other accolades section doesn't cite any sources.
• Record sales and peak positions belong in his discography, not his list of awards and nominations.
• You only need to link articles the first time you mention them in the body of the article.
• It should be "Daddy Yankee has received X award(s) from Y nomination(s)" or "Daddy Yankee has received X nomination(s)."
• I've never seen that overview over how many awards he won each year anywhere else and I don't think it's necessary.
• ref #1 doesn't mention author, publication, date, access date etc.
• You need to link publication and publisher if they have wiki articles. Also, for example, billboard.com should be Billboard. Littlecarmen (talk) 07:08, 9 April 2017 (UTC)