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I DO NOT KNOW ACTUAL PROCESS OF HOW ARTICLE WILL PUBLISH Chaudhary Mohammad Ilyas (talk) 15:58, 26 December 2021 (UTC)

Chaudhary Mohammad Ilyas It has been speedy deleted as unambiguous advertising and self written vanity page. Theroadislong (talk) 17:18, 26 December 2021 (UTC)

Confirming changes

Being the native of area i hereby confirm the changes made to article Chiranbal Aamir Hamid Wagay (talk) 20:16, 26 December 2021 (UTC)

Wikipedia requires published reliable sources however, sorry. Theroadislong (talk) 20:33, 26 December 2021 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Yun Tu Hai Pyar Bohut

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Thank You

Hi Theroadislong, thank you for your feedback. I will ensure it complies. Kind regards, Shane — Preceding unsigned comment added by ShaneGoodwin (talkcontribs) 21:27, 27 December 2021 (UTC)

January 2022 Women in Red

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Hi Theroadislong, I've updated my user page. It is indeed I'm trying to add my company profile to wikipedia and I'm quite new to this too. Is there anything more I can do to get my article approved? Thank you very much. - TungTa91293 (talk) 11:49, 29 December 2021 (UTC)

Field Ready

Hi, you very quickly reverted my edit on Field Ready. I removed the AfC tag as I recently learned that the AfC process is optional for editors and that I am allowed to move into main space myslf if I think it meets policy. As I beleive I adress origianl feedback (from you) then I was about to do that. However, if your revert is an indication that you don't agree, then I will take a different path (probably leave it in AfC, or abandon depending on your reply)

Can I clarify: were you just reverting on a point of order/process, or should I take this as a signal that you do not think it is currently ready for the main space? CT55555 (talk) 16:39, 29 December 2021 (UTC)

Your draft Draft:Field Ready will require an admin to accept as the target page Field Ready is protected. Theroadislong (talk) 16:45, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
What does that mean? Does it mean I did something wrong, or that someone tried to create the page before me? Also, sorry, I'm still a bit confused if you're suggesting I'm doing it wrong, if the article is ready for main, or it this just means there is a tick-box I need to go to get this on main CT55555 (talk) 16:50, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
You have done nothing wrong. The article has been repeatedly repeatedly recreated {as blatant advertising) in the past so the title was protected in order to stop that, an admin would need to accept it. Theroadislong (talk) 16:55, 29 December 2021 (UTC)

User:UKEducator/sandbox: Mavis Bacca Dowden draft

Hi,

Thanks for your comment on my draft. I fully understand the imperative of keeping out fringe topics / cranks / and items of little public value. I was motivated to prepare this draft after finding an article on Mavis Bacca Dowden in the Catalan Wikipedia: https://ca.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mavis_Bacca_Dowden

I thought that this might indicate there would be space for an aricle about her in her native tongue.

best regards.

PS I could not figure out how to change the draft title from User:UKEducator/sandbox to Mavis Bacca Dowden UKEducator (talk) 18:19, 29 December 2021 (UTC)

I recently published an article and was not accepted by your side.

Hi, My name is Hassan and I recently published an article for an organization page. I have added numerous references. I followed some of the Wikipedia pages (related to my niche) that gave similar references from some blogs and I have more authentic references than them. well, my question is, can you please identify specifically which things is not up to the mark as per your policy. like, which reference is not good, or is there some content section that is not good enough.

You mentioned that "blogs are rarely considered reliable sources" but these are the references that I saw on some other wiki pages of our niche. e.g. https://www.informationweek.com/government/tineye-image-search-finds-copyright-infringers http://www.hackerfactor.com/blog/index.php?/archives/432-Looks-Like-It.html

Regards, Hassan — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hassan1203 (talkcontribs) 07:40, 30 December 2021 (UTC)

hello . can you help me to create a wiki page for an entrepreneur — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sohotblog (talkcontribs) 09:44, 30 December 2021 (UTC)

requesting to know about my article

Hi. my article on canadian chamber of commerce middle east was declined by you stating it looks more like an advertisement. I have edited and modified more and again this was the reason stated. I would want to know if at all its possible please let me know which part looks like an advertisement so that i could understand more before submitting. I have glanced similar articles and now I am stuck with this point. Please help. it would be great at least if you say which topic looks like an advertisement. Please help. I am a 1st time editor and this would be huge for me if you could help me. Thanks and Regards. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mivida2021 (talkcontribs) 12:10, 30 December 2021 (UTC)

Re:Draft:Canadian Chamber of Commerce, Middle East Wikipedia is NOT for merely providing information. A Wikipedia article about an organisation must summarise what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about them, showing how it meets Wikipedia's special definition of a [[WP:NORG|notable organisation], your draft has a large amount of unsourced content. Theroadislong (talk) 12:35, 30 December 2021 (UTC)

Thanks

Hi there! I just wanted to thank you for what you do, particularly in reviewing pages. You've been really great at helping me out and telling me how to improve the page I've been writing. Hope this finds you well, Cessna. Cessnabroon (talk) 14:06, 30 December 2021 (UTC)

Neal Fraser Article

Hello,

I appreciate your feedback on my article and would love advice on how to improve the sources. Instead of IMDB would I be able to cite the Food Network website or another Wikipedia page that references Neal Fraser's television appearances? Additionally would the following sources be considered problematic secondary sources as well - LAist, Modern Adventure, Garrett Leight, LA Downtowner, Bravo TV? I'd love to know which of the sources are problematic so I can find alternatives and edit the article accordingly.

Thank You! Halejiana (talk) — Preceding undated comment added 16:59, 30 December 2021 (UTC)

Reinstate page for Slug Signorino

In response to your message: Hello, I'm Theroadislong. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Slug Signorino, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at the tutorial on citing sources, or if you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Theroadislong (talk) 07:46, 29 March 2020 (UTC)

I think you’ve made a mistake archiving my fathers page. I am his daughter and have his permission to add or update information about him. What do I need to do or provide to have his page reinstated? Susan Signorino Susan Signorino (talk) 00:19, 31 December 2021 (UTC)

The article was deleted not archived, after a deletion discussion here Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Slug Signorino back in April 2020, I'm afraid he was not deemed notable enough for an article. Theroadislong (talk) 08:33, 31 December 2021 (UTC)

Question about rejected page on Alessandro Grego

Hello

The page on Alessandro Grego was rejected with the reason "too much unsourced content, where did it come from? Please cite all content". Can you help me to understand the rejection? The content has several references (16 sources). What am I missing? Shortening the article, leaving only a few referenced items would do? There are no other primary sources available. Any hint on how to proceed would be greatly appreciated. Thanks. Cormarer (talk) 22:52, 1 January 2022 (UTC)

Submission rejection of Zaeem Ahmed page

I got the message that my submission got rejected. I tried several times and created this page with several revisions. The link I have used is the news link about his work. I did not use any link from reprints of that news. Please consider the submission. I am trying to contribute to the platform with missing profiles of Bangladeshi businessmen. Please approve the page. If this person will be featured or I can find other authentic links, I can add them later. Please reconsider the page. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Foyjul90 (talkcontribs) 11:40, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

Please note that Wikipedia doesn't host "profiles" it has articles about notable people. The Early life and family background section is unsourced, education section is unsourced, Religious and Political Views section is unsourced and we have no interest in his unsourced "vision". Theroadislong (talk) 14:36, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

My draft of Gordon Lippman

Are you looking for page references in those books? I'm not clear on what exactly is missing.

Lofty10820 (talk) 18:57, 2 January 2022 (UTC) Rob

Request on 12:16:19, 3 January 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by Jacobnationfergus


Hi there,

I'm a massive newbie with all of this so thank you for taking the time to review my article! I've spent the last hour in a chat room asking for help, and still seem to have got it wrong this time. Is there any advice you have for me to get this article live? As I find it all very confusing

Thanks!

Jacob


Jacobnationfergus (talk) 12:16, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

Creating an article is the most difficult thing to do on Wikipedia, there is nothing in your draft to suggest that they pass WP:NMUSICIAN. Theroadislong (talk) 12:22, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

Raymont-Osman

Hi, thanks for reviewing our page. First time I have written so very new to this.


The main commonwealth games link has a video where I talk about the design for several minutes. Is there a better way to refer to that? I appreciate the text isn't that in-depth.


I have a few more pages to reference, are these any more suitable rather than passing references?

https://www.birminghamworld.uk/news/commonwealth-games-2022-meet-the-team-who-designed-the-queens-baton-relay-3399959 https://visitbirmingham.com/inspire-me/blog/read/2021/09/innovative-baton-design-and-294-day-route-for-the-birmingham-2022-queens-baton-relay-revealed-b1871



There is also this link, but we sponsored the content so not that independant, but in-depth and a well respected publication

https://www.imeche.org/news/news-article/engineering-the-birmingham-2022-queen's-baton


Thanks, Tom

45.8.103.0 (talk) 13:56, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

Wikipedia really isn't the place to be promoting your design, a video of you is not independent or reliable, blogs are not considered reliable and sponsored contnet clearly isn't independent and please remember to log in when posting. Theroadislong (talk) 13:59, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

Wibty

Hello dear Theroadislong. Wibty article is available on Azerbaijan Wiki, WikiData and WikiCommons. --Santorica (talk) 14:36, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

I'm afraid that has no relevance, you have uploaded some images to commons, that confers zero notability and having an article in another language Wikipedia does not mean we have one here. Theroadislong (talk) 14:42, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

MRL Consulting (Draft Page)

Hi There

I trust that you are well. I just wanted to chat with you and understand how can I improve my first draft page to get it published?

Your assistance is greatly appreciated.

Kind regards. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kelvin Gates (talkcontribs) 15:05, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

Firstly do you have any connection to the company? The draft is very poorly sourced with content NOT supported by the sources. Theroadislong (talk) 15:28, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

I recently published an article and was not accepted by your side (sending again)

Hi,

I am expecting your response to my query which I sent to you on 30th of December, 2021.

Regards, — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hassan1203 (talkcontribs) 10:54, 5 January 2022 (UTC)

Concern regarding User:SMCA64/sandbox

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 11:02, 5 January 2022 (UTC)

I AM TRYING TO GET BIRCHES

WHY DO YOU DICLINE MY SHi I JUST WANNA HAVE FUN — Preceding unsigned comment added by Alfr0667 (talkcontribs) 12:34, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

Hiiiii, can we collaborate?

Can do better and i like ur name and profile TheBestUser123456789 (talk) 13:56, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

Dear Theroadislong

I have rewritten a draft Wikipedia entry on Dutch naval architect Piet van Ossanen. I'd appreciate if you can read it you and see if it needs more work. With kind regards, 2021DutchSailor (talk) 14:33, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

My previous comment still applies namely "There are whole paragraphs with zero sources." Theroadislong (talk) 14:40, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

The Special Barnstar
Hello,

I hope to finally have my first article published thanks to you. Enidbala (talk) 14:59, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

Olimpia Smajlaj Page

Hello,

I have just finished writing the article for Olimpia Smajlaj. Please let me know what information do i need to add to have the article published in Wikipedia. This is my first article.

Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Enidbala (talkcontribs) 14:34, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

You moved Olimpia Smajlaj from draft twice without submitting it for review, it has now been sent to WP:AFD you can comment there on why you think she passes WP:NSINGER. Theroadislong (talk) 14:38, 6 January 2022 (UTC)


I do not know who moved the page online, i was working on my draft. Please can you help me to send it for review and give me some advices to make the article acceptable for wikipedia.

Thanks in advance Theroadislong. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Enidbala (talkcontribs) 14:57, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

Olimpia Smajlaj would need to pass the criteria at WP:NSINGER, she doesn't so it has been sent for deletion, you can comment here Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Olimpia Smajlaj (2nd nomination). Theroadislong (talk) 15:01, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi! I'm responding to your message about disclosing paid editing. Thank you so much for the help. Where in the page should I place the disclosure?

Thank you so much! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Curt Obernik (talkcontribs) 15:32, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

This needs to be placed on your user page User:Curt Obernik, full instructions were posted on your user page. Theroadislong (talk) 15:44, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

The Photograph That Changed My Life

Dear Theroadislong,

My references are from Financial Times, Guardian and RPS websites, I wonder why you don't accept these articles as reliable, secondary sources that are independent. I think they are very reliable and very independent resources.

Best, elifnurk

JONITA DODA ARTICLE

thanks for the review , the concerned actor is highly notable and the only amazon link i added is a watch link of her movie as amazon is one the biggest OTT platform today.maybe i dont know the technical language of wikipedia as im new...sir why dont you correct the article im attaching the reference links and can send you the data i have collected and written.or you can recommend an author who writes about actors for me to learn better.

Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure

@Theroadislong:

Hi there, I've declared my employee and client as per the Paid-contribution disclosure you suggested. Would you mind having a look at my page to if that is suffice to move forward?

Many thanks in advanced.

Deleting my page

I was going to edit my page a bit more, but the submission got declined. Can you please help me?

I will use sources on my Yonges Island page......

Trust me I will use sources!! It will be put on the page within 3 days...

So, if I edit my draft with some sources, Is there a small percent of chance of it being accepted this time? Please

Need help on: Submission declined

hi i recently created a page which got declined by you and had two comments as follwing.

1. is submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

2. This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion on Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

I have updated reference links and i don't understand why it is appearing as an advertisement. Can you please help me on this, what should I change to get this page published? Ar.S.Anand Kumar (talk) 09:38, 7 January 2022 (UTC)

Re: Draft:Papni School of Architecture In order for an article’s subject to be considered notable by the Wikipedia community, we require that it receive significant coverage in multiple reliable secondary sources that are independent of the subject this is what you base an article on. Your draft has a single source, that of the institution itself, we have no interest in what they say about themselves. Theroadislong (talk) 09:42, 7 January 2022 (UTC)

Previous Decline

hi this is Prierya2k8 I fixed everything that you said can you please recheck Draft:Shivangi Khedkar please and thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Prierya2k8 (talkcontribs) 18:50, 7 January 2022 (UTC)

Thank you

for approving my stubby article on Dorothy Morland so quickly; much appreciated, and encouraging too. I will continue to try to improve it. Best wishes, Iaineditor (talk) 20:59, 8 January 2022 (UTC)

My pleasure and nothing wrong with stubby articles! Theroadislong (talk) 21:02, 8 January 2022 (UTC)

Climate-ADAPT page

Dear Theroadislong, thank you again for your comment to my article (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:European_Climate_Adaptation_Platform_Climate-ADAPT). I would like to ask you a question, please: - You wrote that "Content like "Web links guide users to resources in English as well as external sources of information." is entirely promotional. As this is something that I describe in a neutral and objective way, by looking at the platform, is this incorrect? If so, does any neutral description of the Climate-ADAPT platform (i.e.: its structure) not acceptable? For example, if I look at pages like this one (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Avibase), I see a description of the content of the database, without any specific reference. Could you please help me understand where the difference lies? - You wrote "Wikipedia summarizes what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about a topic". As the importance of Climate-ADAPT as a knowledge sharing platform is mentioned in the Adaptation Strategy of the European Commission, isn't this a reliable source? Furthermore, aren't the references from the books and peer-reviewed articles from scientific journals that I have included reliable enough? If not, could you please help me understand what is missing or what a reliable source could be? - You also wrote "Please also review conflict of interest.". However, I have already disclosed all the necessary information about my profile and contribution. Below your comment, you can see that it is mentioned that "This article contains paid contributions.". - Also, the language is very neutral, partially based on the simple description of the platform (i.e.: menu items) and partially taken from books, articles and official documents issued by European Institutions. May I kindly ask you to advice more specifically on the points above? Any additional hint would be extremely appreciated. Thank you so much in advance! Chiaramzztt (talk) 15:48, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

I suggest you submit the draft for review I will not review it, but let others take a look. Paid editing will be VERY heavily scrutinised. The fact that other similar articles exist is not a good argument. Theroadislong (talk) 16:02, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
Thank you Theroadislong, I will do so and see what additional feedback I get. My reference to the other article was meant to simply understand relevant difference, so that I could improve my article and make it compliant with the rules. I just want to make sure the article meets Wikipedia's criteria. Thank you very much for your advice! Chiaramzztt (talk) 08:53, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

Reason for my article to get declined

Hello,

My article, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Vayam got declined by you. This is a multiple award winning film . I had mentioned the OTT links of the film as well as the newspaper articles as well as the award website links of the movie. Since, I am new to this , Kindly let me know what changes i can make in it for it to get accepted.

Also, in the comments section, you have mentioned, undisclosed paid editing needs to be addressed. Kindly explain to me what it means and how to sort it out ? — Preceding unsigned comment added by NilayMitash1986 (talkcontribs) 21:22, 8 January 2022 (UTC)

NilayMitash1986 The awards do not appear to be notable (no Wikipedia articles about them) and draft creator User:KaizenKraft has been blocked for promotion, what is your connection to the film I wonder, it's the only thing you have worked on here. Theroadislong (talk) 21:29, 8 January 2022 (UTC)

Okay. These awards are reputable awards. Will it be enough if i attach newspaper articles of reputed newspaper like TimesOfIndia mentioning the name of these awards? Also, I have worked as a part of the film. What is the process to disclose this ? — Preceding unsigned comment added by NilayMitash1986 (talkcontribs) 22:42, 8 January 2022 (UTC)

See Wikipedia:Plain and simple conflict of interest guide you need to disclose your conflict of interest on your user page. Theroadislong (talk) 09:06, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

AFC or AFD?

In this comment, did you really mean AFC, or perhaps AFD? --David Biddulph (talk) 18:25, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

Thanks...I spend more time at AFC but meant AFD. Theroadislong (talk) 19:02, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

All Tiny Creatures page

what exactly is wrong with this page? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:All_Tiny_Creatures

It has 7 citations from some of the most credible music magazines that exist (Stereogum, Pitchfork, SPIN, The AV Club) and cross references to members being in some of the literal biggest bands that exist (Bon Iver).

Please tell me what I could possibly do to make it more "credible"?

---Tom — Preceding unsigned comment added by 134.215.125.29 (talk) 23:35, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

Firstly you appear to have a conflict of interest being a band member, albeit you are editing now whilst logged ogged. The draft Draft:All Tiny Creatures does not show how the band meets WP:NBAND, the fact that two members went on to play in notable bands is irrelevant. Theroadislong (talk) 08:43, 11 January 2022 (UTC)

Edit: Demi Dahmer

Thank you for your input

Edit: Demi Dhamer I am not showing "Amazon" I am showing the artist was on the cover of the magazine. Please be more clear and I have read the guidelines many times. I'm showing multiple citations articles, news, Blogs and and interviews. There are many articles on Wikipedia with artists that have far less citations. " Madhat1988 (talk) 11:45, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

If I am missing something I would like a more clear and not a passive explanation. Thank you for your time. Madhat1988 (talk) 11:48, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

This [1] is a reference to Amazon, it is a dead link, and Amazon cannot be used as a source, neither can other photographs of magazine covers, though the content of the magazines would be great as sources. Blogs and interviews are not acceptable. Theroadislong (talk) 11:52, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
That other crap articles exist is not a reason to create more. Theroadislong (talk) 11:52, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
The actress Frenchy Morgan who I personally know. Has used IMDB in her Wikipedia page. Who can one artist have certain things and another not? Please do not reference things as crap it is not nice to say and not professional.

Thank you. Madhat1988 (talk) 14:21, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

Did you read other stuff exists? The fact that another article has poor unreliable sources doesn't mean that we create others like it. I have removed the IMDb source from Angelique Morgan thanks for the heads up. Theroadislong (talk) 14:28, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

How many 3 party independent citations should a artist have before getting accepted? Madhat1988 (talk) 20:26, 11 January 2022 (UTC)

In light of this [2] perhaps you should ask elsewhere for help.Theroadislong (talk) 20:36, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
Also like to say thank you for taking the time to talk to me. Just wanted to let you know I have autism so if I seem a little off i apologise.I am new on here my family thinks this will be good for me. Thank you again. Just so you know I am a fan of this artist because he stands up for people like me. He also is a big supporter of the LGBTQ community. Madhat1988 (talk) 20:36, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
The draft needs to pass the criteria at WP:NSINGER and I'm not certain it does yet, I wish you well. Theroadislong (talk) 20:40, 11 January 2022 (UTC)

Interim Spaces wiki page

Hello there

I have amended the draft so that it includes relevant links such as to press features - would you kindly revisit?

Many thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Boringmikesmith (talkcontribs) 10:15, 12 January 2022 (UTC)

Draft:Interim Spaces was rejected it is just blatant advertising, you can ask for advice at The Teahouse or here [3] Theroadislong (talk) 10:21, 12 January 2022 (UTC)

I need your help to improve my submitted article

Hello, sir. I noticed you consider my article (Arfius Al-din) into deleation process. I improve it. Please sir remove the deletion process and improve it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dadu1212 (talkcontribs) 10:19, 12 January 2022 (UTC)

You bypassed the WP:AFC process and moved it to mainspace, he does not appear to be a notable musician so I have taken it to WP:AFD where others will decide, you can comment there too. Theroadislong (talk) 10:38, 12 January 2022 (UTC)

Request on 23:37:34, 12 January 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by Benwah the magnificent


I don't know if this is a proper place to discuss the item but to me, from the information available, it seems so. Please correct me if I am wrong.

first, this was written on my sandbox and I only published to save my work. I am a brand new user and don't know how all this stuff is supposed to work.

second, there is a Spanish version on the exact same topic in Wikipedia. This subject is so new there is not much information about it.

third, thanks for your quick review in light of the circumstances. in regards to COI I am a beta tester and thought it would warrant a nice article about the game to this point

Benwah the magnificent (talk) 23:37, 12 January 2022 (UTC)

You say "This subject is so new there is not much information about it." Wikipedia is not the place to tell the world about new things, Wikipedia only reports on what reliable sources say about a topic. Sources need to be in depth and significant coverage not mere mentions. Theroadislong (talk) 07:28, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

Draft:Lost_on_You_Music

Hi, if what you do Lost on You does Draft:Lost_on_You_Music doesn't have enough notability for you, then you are a very bad person.

I didn't comment on notability, I declined the draft because it appeared to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Theroadislong (talk) 10:48, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

Theroadislong The sources cited are the best electronic music magazines in the world. The moderators should have a little more information before making a review of a particular article, way too many mediocre people on Wikipedia taking decisions... And it doesn't feel like an advertisement at ALL, it actually says very little about Lost on You's charitable work, it's just that when it comes to helping people in need, to being kind, no one really cares. If we are going to talk about advertisements, I suggest you take a look at this one. Diynamic and it's just one example of the amount of junk content on Wikipedia.

I am very sorry but I do not agree with your decision at all. Zero objectivity. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrzej Rybkiewicz (talkcontribs) 11:00, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

Ok, feel free to re-submit, and let another reviewer take a look and please see other poor quality articles exist. Theroadislong (talk) 11:10, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

Theroadislong I have been waiting for almost 1 year... — Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrzej Rybkiewicz (talkcontribs) 11:13, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

You need to re-submit the draft otherwise nobody will know you are waiting? Theroadislong (talk) 11:15, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

Draft article on William Ryley (d. 1667)

I have corrected the citations. — Preceding unsigned comment added by GlosJan (talkcontribs) 12:15, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

Thank you, I have accepted William Ryley. Theroadislong (talk) 12:21, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

Draft: Plastometrex

Hi Theroadislong, I'm still new at wikipedia and starting to learn how everything works. Indeed you were correct that the article was too promotional, my apologies for that. If I put it up for review again I will be sure to change that! Though as I understand more what notability actually means (thought I did but I was wrong), it will probably be a while before that will happen. I will read up and will do better when/if I write the page on the new technology the company is based on (assuming that is notable :D). Thanks for the great work, you wiki editors are the light in the world of misinformation and subliminal promotion (which I somewhat did accidentally myself :( ) So just wanted to put some positivity here and say thanks! --Vilnix (talk) 15:07, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi, would you mond to tell me where it is too promotionnal please ? I add all the references I have and tried to be neutral as I can. Thanks for feedback — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jo Perras (talkcontribs) 15:21, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

I have commented on your draft, you can also get advice here Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk if you are being paid to edit I would have assumed you were already familiar with how Wikipedia works. I have no desire whatsoever to help you further, most of us are volunteers here. Theroadislong (talk) 15:49, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

Hello! I think this is clearly a misconception. What fleeting mentions? The article contains a review of a famous critic, a full biography from authoritative sources, getting into famous charts. Justify, please, your result. Calvinn1 (talk) 18:17, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

Sorry but your draft did not appear to pass the criteria at WP:MUSICBIO, you can ask for independent advice here Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk. Theroadislong (talk) 18:28, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
There, anyway, the article will not be taken out into the main space. The article contains a review from a well-known critic, charts, and other media publications that describe the person and some nominations in as much detail as possible. Ranks 4th as the most followed Likee blogger. And this is also confirmed by an authoritative source in the article. Collectively significant as a blogger and singer. Calvinn1 (talk) 18:41, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

What went wrong with my submission?

Can you please inform my why my submission was rejected? Is there anything I can do to submit it successfully? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nmellios (talkcontribs) 18:53, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

Your draft User:Nmellios/sandbox/A Water-Smart Society did not read like an encyclopedia article to me, you can get other opinions at Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk. Theroadislong (talk) 18:56, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

thanks

Thank you for your feedback. --Giovanna D'Alessio (talk) 08:39, 14 January 2022 (UTC)

Reliable Source

Hello, just now my film page got declined because of reliable sources. It is an upcoming fIlm, there is no newspaper article published about it now. Which reliable source should I give ? Is there any other source ? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pradnyeshparulekar (talkcontribs) 11:35, 14 January 2022 (UTC)

I don't know, but we only base articles on reliable independent sources, so if there are none then we can't have an article. Theroadislong (talk) 11:38, 14 January 2022 (UTC)

Draft re-submissions

Hi Theroadislong

I have read the review and believe I have done everything to amend these problems. I would appreciate any feedback or support 😊

All the best

David — Preceding unsigned comment added by Davidpink1 (talkcontribs) 12:06, 14 January 2022 (UTC)

Looks like Draft:Rabab Tantawy has been tagged for speedy deletion, it is very far from being a suitable draft for publication. Theroadislong (talk) 12:13, 14 January 2022 (UTC)

about directdl

hello this is article like https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bitport — Preceding unsigned comment added by Daniel.halkin (talkcontribs) 11:33, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

Emmanuel Enoidem

Hello Theroadislong

I tried creating a Wiki page for my Uncle who is the former People's democratic party National Legal Adviser and currently aspiring for Senate. I noticed that the page was denied by you, This is actually my first-page creation on Wiki. Please I need you to give me all the necessary assistance to succeed as a Wiki editor.

I look forward to learning from you. Please kindly approve the page "Emmanuel Enoidem".

Thank you and God bless

Mitchel Nkereuwem UnlimitedMitch — Preceding unsigned comment added by Unlimitedmitch (talkcontribs) 13:19, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

Thanks or Your Guidance Theroadislong

Many thanks for letting know that blogs and Youtube and not reliable sources. I think I have removed all wrong references. If you have the time, kindly check if it's okay now, please. Thanks Nellly2022 (talk) 17:04, 14 January 2022 (UTC)The link to the subject is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Chris_Ojigbani?action=edit#cite_note-%3A7-13Nellly2022 (talk) 17:04, 14 January 2022 (UTC)

@ Theroadislong, just to let you know that I just added a few more reliable sources to the subject. Please help by checking it out when you are free.The draft is Draft:Chris Ojigbani Many thanks Nellly2022 (talk) 14:36, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

Dear Therodislong, Thanks for your comment on the page I just created. I actually mistakenly proposed the page for review. Been editor on Wikipedia for many years in French: https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Utilisateur:Baruch I took your advice and improved the references. I hope the article will be rapidly accepted. Cheers. Baruch (talk) 14:09, 16 January 2022 (UTC)Baruch

Sorry, there is something I am missing about formatting references. I will check again. Haven't been editing for a while, rules might have changed. Thanks again. Baruch (talk) 14:18, 16 January 2022 (UTC)Baruch

Thanks a lot. Pleasure working with you. Cheers. Baruch (talk) 14:27, 16 January 2022 (UTC)Baruch

Lucy Piper Drums

Hey there!

I thought I had written the article pretty neutral, but have just amended it and provided lots of external links now so maybe that'll be more appropriate? Please feel free to help edit to make it more neutral if you so wish.

Best, Lucy — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lucykatepiper (talkcontribs) 17:10, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

Marginally improved, but still no evidence at all that you pass the criteria at WP:NMUSICIAN I'm afraid. Theroadislong (talk) 17:15, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

Slywriter comment on Draft:Xerox 2700 Distributed Electronic Printer

Dear Theroadislong: Thank you for your past comments. I don't know how to respond directly to a comment by Slywriter on my draft. The comment asked for more citations and I have added a link to an interview with Gary Starkweather, laser printer patentee, with whom I work at Xerox beginning in 1968. Other material for my article came from original engineering documents and personal papers. I was hoping to record the information before it is lost. Please forward to Slywriter if possible. Many thanks. Ruston7 (talk) 19:05, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

@Slywriter: None of that would be usable I'm afraid, interviews are not reliable or independent and original documents and personal documents are likewise not suitable. Theroadislong (talk) 19:11, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

Draft:Chris Ojigbani

Dear Theroadislong, Many thanks for your review on the page I created. I sent you a message about 2 days ago but you probably didn't see it.

I took you counsel and have improved the references. I hope the article will be accepted. Many thanks and best regards.Nellly2022 (talk) 22:41, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

Having declined it once, I will leave it for another reviewer to have a look. Theroadislong (talk) 22:46, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

Many thanks for the reply. I also want to learn editing under you. How can I go about it, please. I want to be a top Wiki editor.Nellly2022 (talk) 22:49, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

easystats article

Hi! You recently reviewed the https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Neuropsychologist/Easystats article, that 1) was classified as not meeting the requirements for an article and 2) had external links in the body. I just wanted to enquire and clarify whether it's worth it to try to edit it further. I originally thought this article had its place as other similarly popular software have one - albeit small - e.g., tidyverse or statsmodels. I heavily used the tidyverse article as a reference for content and length, which also includes external links in the body. My questions are: should I edit the tidyverse to remove the external links too? Should I remove the external links and add more secondary sources to the new easystats one, or does it have other fundamental issues preventing its creation? Thanks a lot, and apologies if that's not the right place to ask. Neuropsychologist (talk) 09:54, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

The article Tidyverse wasn't a very good model, see WP:OSE, removing the external links and adding more independent reliable sources would greatly help in getting it accepted. Theroadislong (talk) 10:07, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

inquiry

can u help me get my wiki pedia published — Preceding unsigned comment added by PeterNsereko (talkcontribs) 12:05, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Park Lane Stables

Hi there,

I am an unpaid volunteer and the edit I made was a factual correction by an overzealous editor. Park Lane Stables is not run by the RDA it belongs to the RDA as a governing body. If I am not 'allowed' to edit and expand on this historic stables with the research a group of locals interested in history this article may not exist. (Meowrobotiks (talk) 12:49, 17 January 2022 (UTC))

You have a conflict of interest and should be using the talk page to request edits. Theroadislong (talk) 11:48, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Morning Edition

I note that you have refused to put my article Morning Edition back onto Wikipedia. I did not fully understand why it was draftified in the first place so can you please tell me why you have refused to allow it back onto Wikipedia. (Rillington (talk) 13:55, 17 January 2022 (UTC))

A Wikipedia article summarizes what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about a topic, your draft Draft:Morning Edition (BBC radio programme) has zero independent sources, hence it was declined. Theroadislong (talk) 13:59, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Thank you for your speedy response. Many articles on Wikipedia which have been accepted have no sources. Programme listings guides are independent of the actual topic so I do not understand why this article has been removed and subsequently rejected by yourself for inclusion on Wikipedia. (Rillington (talk) 14:08, 17 January 2022 (UTC))
See other poor quality articles exist. Theroadislong (talk) 14:17, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

didnt know

ok i deleted it i didnt know you cant post businesses here — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yourfeaturedmedia (talkcontribs) 20:18, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Draft:Chris Ojigbani

Dear Theroadislong, I read some help links, and have fixed the references and added some independent references from some academic books. Though you told me to wait for another reviewer to look at my article, please if you have the time, kindly look at it. Cheers! Nellly2022 (talk) 22:21, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

No I will let another reviewer look, it was deleted not long ago here Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Chris Ojigbani and I still don't think he passes WP:GNG. Theroadislong (talk) 22:28, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

The article/Chris Ojigbani deleted was not written or edited by me and was obviously weak. I have used many independent reliable references for the article and there are even many more reliable references I could use, but I feel the ones I have used are enough. I am sorry for disturbing you, knowing that you are a volunteer, but I would be grateful if you can look at it again as I have learnt a lot these few days and have greatly improved the article. The subject is very notable in Africa and there are too many reliable sources to use as reference. I have used some, and after my last editing, I have still seen many academic journals and books I can use as sources of notability for the subject. But I think the references I have used are enough to prove his notability. Kindly check the article when you are a bit free, please. Thanks a lot! Cheers! Nellly2022 (talk) 22:55, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Draft: Chris Ojigbani

Dear Theroadislong, I read some help links, and have fixed the references and added some independent references from some academic books. Though you told me to wait for another reviewer to look at my article, please if you have the time, kindly look at it. Cheers! Nellly2022 (talk) 22:21, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

No I will let another reviewer look, it was deleted not long ago here Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Chris Ojigbani and I still don't think he passes WP:GNG. Theroadislong (talk) 22:28, 17 January 2022 (UTC)


The article/Chris Ojigbani deleted was not written or edited by me and was obviously weak. I have used many independent reliable references for the article and there are even many more reliable references I could use, but I feel the ones I have used are enough. I am sorry for disturbing you, knowing that you are a volunteer, but I would be grateful if you can look at it again as I have learnt a lot these few days and have greatly improved the article. The subject is very notable in Africa and there are too many reliable sources to use as reference. I have used some, and after my last editing, I have still seen many academic journals and books I can use as sources of notability for the subject. But I think the references I have used are enough to prove his notability. Kindly check the article when you are a bit free, please. Thanks a lot! Cheers! Nellly2022 (talk) 23:05, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Draft: DoD Guidons

Good evening (or morning/afternoon wherever you're at). I already informed my client it would be hard to get the page on Wikipedia without significant news or other information about the company meeting the notability requirements. However, you stated that the information reads nothing like an encyclopedia. I utilized the Wikipedia template here: [[4]] as a guideline. Can you give me more advice on what you meant with your comment and how to improve it (not interested in getting the current article reviewed again right now until my client provides me with the requested independent notability documentation), but just advice on how to improve in the future. Thank you for your time. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Leftconcerned (talkcontribs) 03:25, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Article rejected

I published a article which is rejected why Syedshoaib370 (talk) 07:54, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Your "vision to spread an ocean of love and peace around the world" whilst worthy, is only supported by your Facebook account, Facebook is not a reliable source here. Theroadislong (talk) 08:49, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Hello

Hello, Unfortunately, there is no different source for female actors and activists living in Iran, and if there is and they do not protect their personalities and publish various sources in foreign sources, it is outside the scope of Iranian politics. It may be a problem for them, so the best source for Iranian actresses living in Iran are these sites, whose names are also recorded in the movies. Because if it was out of this, the directors and producers would not allow access to their name on the imdb site.

Thank you for your attention and sympathy for the wiki rules, and I hope you can help make the article well-publicized. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A01:5EC0:581B:12A1:5927:8DAB:96E9:DC64 (talk) 09:34, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

zahra meygoli — Preceding unsigned comment added by Karestoonegoli (talkcontribs) 09:38, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Request on 14:20:57, 18 January 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by TonyRao


Hello Theroadislong

We're trying to compile a list of business publications and the entry for Start Your Business is getting declined. There are WIKI pages and external sites linking to the publication and confirmation of the ISSN publication entry. Surely a business publication that has been in circulation for 15 years is suitable for an entry of Wikipedia? There are similar publications with less reference sources:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Artist_(UK_magazine) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Revival_(UK_magazine) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Family_Circle_(UK_magazine)

There are more examples where there is less information yet a published page. Please let me know what more information is needed or if the existing copy needs text amended.

Thanks Tony


TonyRao (talk) 14:20, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Who is "we"? Wikipedia user accounts are strictly single person use. Your draft Draft:Start Your Business Magazine uses press releases and Wikipedia as sources neither of which are reliable. Also see other poor quality articles exist The Artist (UK_magazine) for example should probably be deleted as non notable. Theroadislong (talk) 14:49, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi, my article was not accepted, and i would like to let you know that it is not 100% finished, and i will message you when is. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cakepops or bust (talkcontribs) 22:21, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Please don't submit for review if not ready. Theroadislong (talk) 22:23, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Draft: Causal Mechanics

Hello, Theroadislong, Thank you so much for examining my article and for your comments. I don't think I have any conflict of interests. --Козырев-Чубаров (talk) 09:33, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Ok, but your user name Козырев-Чубаров translates as "Kozyrev-Chubarov" and Kozyrev is the Soviet astrophysicist who developed the theory of Causal mechanics which you are writing about. Theroadislong (talk) 09:56, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

I re-submit this because Draft:Samuel Hwang is no longer accepting AFC reviews. Wiki Emoji | Emojiwiki Talk~~ 10:52, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Not sure why you think that? You can submit Draft:Samuel Hwang by clicking the blue submit button. Theroadislong (talk) 10:57, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Rejection

Hi Theroadislong (incidentally one of my favourite songs!). Thank you for taking the time to look at my submission - I am very 'green' when it comes to wikipedia and need to learn! Is there anything I can do do make it acceptable?

Mick — Preceding unsigned comment added by SussexSassenach (talkcontribs) 11:22, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Your draft Draft:Sussex Inventor has no sources, independent sources are what we base articles on. A Wikipedia article about a person must summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about them, showing how they meet Wikipedia's special definition of a notable person. Theroadislong (talk) 11:53, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Collegium Helveticum

Hello and thank you for your comment regarding missing independent sources concerning the Collegium Helveticum.

Do you mean sources like this: https://www.alpa.swiss/alpa-log/wired-nation-exhibition-by-collegium-helveticum http://shg.foundation/en/portrait/stiftungsrat/

If you see a chance to help, this would be great. Thank you so much.

Andrea — Preceding unsigned comment added by ReaElle (talkcontribs) 12:16, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

lainovies

there are currently no news articles on LaiNovies. How can I add other sources?

--Cakepops or bust (talk) 13:53, 19 January 2022 (UTC) LaiNovies

You clearly can't and having nothing written about Draft:Republic of LaiNovies (micronation) in reliable sources is a sure indication that the topic is not notable. Theroadislong (talk) 13:55, 19 January 2022 (UTC)