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Student's article speedily deleted as a copyright violation

I noticed the page Concept cars and its future aspects via the New Article Bot daily report and tagged it after it failed a trip through the copyvio detector. It was then deleted. It appears to be the product of a class project; I suspect that this sort of thing should be reported to the course instructor, but I'm not sure if there's a proper channel to do so. XOR'easter (talk) 22:08, 26 October 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from OctopusSuction (talk)

Hello!

I am at an early phase of drafting some additions to the Wikipedia article for Science and technology in South Korea. I feel like I am on the right track, but I was hoping I could get your expert opinion to be sure that I am doing what I should be. Any suggestions, recommendations, or criticisms are welcome!!

Thank you,


--OctopusSuction (talk) 01:23, 26 October 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from Vleondelavega (talk)

Hello.

I need help with... I need to edit my article and I don't know where to start



--Vleondelavega (talk) 21:58, 27 October 2019 (UTC)Victoria

I'll respond on your talk page! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:50, 29 October 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from T.thomas47 (talk) 2

Hello.

I need help with... Just wanted you to look at my article, the evaluation and the contents I've added this far, just wanted some feedback, to see if I'm on the right track, Thanks


--T.thomas47 (talk) 18:50, 28 October 2019 (UTC)

Hey

Shalor--please see User talk:ContrerasLopez. I'm sorry, but if they continue I will have to block them. Drmies (talk) 03:41, 29 October 2019 (UTC)

Drmies, Yikes! Thanks for the head's up!!! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:06, 29 October 2019 (UTC)

Chele question

I had the same question on where to find my other sandboxes for my class. I am still not sure how to write my article in my sandbox and then make it into the mainstream Of wiki. Any help would be great! Cheri Shelton 20:33, 26 October 2019 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Chele1169 (talk • contribs) 20:28, 26 October 2019 (UTC)

shivanshpatel312

Hii this is shivanshpatel312 a user from georgia state perimeter college My article was deleted under speedy deletion. I know that i have used the original information from different sources but along with that i also credited those author. So i request you to add my article in my sandbox box i won't publish it on the wiki.I am just completing my assignment given by the college Thank you 

Shivanshpatel312 (talk) 16:12, 29 October 2019 (UTC)

Hey This is Contreras Lopez

Hi, is this okay to put on my article. According to the article, Women's Right in Iran, states that "Women’s rights are severely restricted in Iran, to the point where women are even forbidden from watching men’s sports in stadiums". This comes to show that there are still places that women are seen as minor compared to men. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ContrerasLopez (talk • contribs) 19:12, 29 October 2019 (UTC)

According to the article, Women's right in Iran, states that "Moreover, married women can't even leave the country without their husband's permission". It shows that it deprives the rights of a human. Of simply going out of the country. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ContrerasLopez (talk • contribs) 19:33, 29 October 2019 (UTC)

Please Help

Hi there! I was wondering if you can review my my sandbox/wiki edit for Zerlina Maxwell? Or is there someone who reviews and edits the part I editted? It is the last paragraph of hers. Thank You! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rosasanti (talk • contribs) 21:51, 29 October 2019 (UTC)

  • Absolutely! I'll leave feedback on your talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:48, 30 October 2019 (UTC)

Nngeste Likké

Hello,

I was wondering if I could get some help with notable sources for the filmmaker Nngeste Likké — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yourstrulyy (talk • contribs) 02:40, 30 October 2019 (UTC)

Question regarding citations

Hi Shalor, in the article I am editing in my sandbox (on Cheryl Gallant), I noticed there is a citation (#1) which only brings the reader to the general Pembroke Observer News website online, not to any specific article. What should I do with that citation? Should I delete it? I have already added a different citation beside it to a CBC article with the same information. Thank you! Kwaaktime, October 31, 2019Kwaaktime (talk) 16:33, 31 October 2019 (UTC)

(talk page watcher) Hi Kaaktime; I responded at your Talk page. Mathglot (talk) 02:05, 1 November 2019 (UTC)

ContrerasLopez

Hi, I want to make sure is this okay. Also, can you let me know if it okay to put my paragraph to the article. I already have one but I am waiting for you guys to approve it. Will you give me feedback with these three please, Thanks You.

Critics have argued that the restriction of women's rights under Saudi Arabia law has led to the separation of gender by causing females to have there owned women-sign and to make sure the mix does not occur into the female and male. Sources Zoeff,Katherine (2011-10-10). Talk of Women's Rights Divides Saudi Arabia. The New York Times.

Gender segregation also impacts the Saudi education system by having more employment for men and the opportunity to graduate with a career. Other hand, women did not have the same opportunity as men. Women did not have the same opportunity of finding a good job. Source Abdella Doumato,Eleanor. Women and Work in Saudi Arabia: How Flexible Are Islamic Margins? Middle East Journal. Vol.53, No. 4 ( Autumn, 1999). pp.568-583.

Gender segregation also impacts the participation of women in the mosque by encouraging women to pray at home and not in the mosque but with the new generation coming women are allowed to pray at the mosque or in their homes. Beyond the Hijab Debates: New Conversations on Gender, Race, and Religion, 2009, First, pp. 52-66. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ContrerasLopez (talk • contribs) 03:00, 30 October 2019 (UTC)

By any chance do you know if I can post the other one. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ContrerasLopez (talk • contribs) 15:15, 30 October 2019 (UTC)

Hi, I am having trouble citing them into the article. [1] Is this correct on how to cite. I am just making sure i do it right. Critics have argued that the restriction of women's rights under Islamic law has led to the segregation of public and private spaces, which they must then attempt to resolve through politics and creating their own spaces.[2] Gender segregation also impacts the company that people keep, as researcher Ziba Mir-Hosseini noted that during her field work she spent most of her time around women and that in some instances she never met the male relatives of some of these women due to the strict regulation of gender segregation.[3] These restrictions may also impact travel, as some rules state that married women are forbidden from traveling without their husband's permission and in some cases women must be segregated from male passengers.[4] — Preceding unsigned comment added by ContrerasLopez (talk • contribs) 20:32, 30 October 2019 (UTC) Cite error: The <ref> tag has too many names (see the help page).

References

  1. ^ Osanloo, Arzoo (2009-03-29). The Politics of Women's Rights in Iran. Princeton University Press. p. 49. ISBN 9780691135472.
  2. ^ Osanloo, Arzoo (2009-03-29). The Politics of Women's Rights in Iran. Princeton University Press. p. 49. ISBN 9780691135472.
  3. ^ Mir-Hosseini, Ziba (2000). Islam and Gender: The Religious Debate in Contemporary Iran. I.B.Tauris. pp. xvii. ISBN 9781850432685.
  4. ^ Hall, C. Michael; Prayag, Girish (2019-05-20). The Routledge Handbook of Halal Hospitality and Islamic Tourism. Routledge. ISBN 9781351367035.

ContrerasLopez

Hi, can you check if this is okay. For the section Afghanistan. Thank you

Gender segregation also forbade the participation of women learning how to drive a car. Saudi country prohibits women to use any car.

Mattson, Ingrid. "Women, Islam, and mosques". Encyclopedia of women and religion in North America. pp. 615 (618). 2016.

Critics have argued that the restriction of women's rights under Afghan rule has led to human rights violations because the community has denied all the recognition in the Taliban.

E. Ghasemi, Marjon. "Islam, international human rights & (and) women's equality: Afghan women under Taliban rule". S. Cal. Rev. L. & Women's Stud. 8, 445. 1998. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ContrerasLopez (talk • contribs) 00:06, 31 October 2019 (UTC)

Hi, I already put my edits but someone remove it I don’t if I did the citation wrong. Can you please help. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ContrerasLopez (talk • contribs) 16:39, 31 October 2019 (UTC)

ContrerasLopez

Hi, I am confused with the citation I made it live already but someone mention the citation was wrong and remove it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ContrerasLopez (talk • contribs) 18:31, 31 October 2019 (UTC)

Although opaque to me, this discussion at my Talk page may be helpful to others who know what the context here is. There appears to be some kind of connection to Islam and gender segregation, but more than that, I cannot say. Mathglot (talk) 02:38, 1 November 2019 (UTC)

Can you look in on this edu editor please?

User:Slmathews is new and is doing edits as part of a college course. Well, you're that course's mentor and he's reverted an edit without any discussion. I'm not sure he understands WP:3RR and perhaps also what constitutes plagiarism so have left him a Talkback on his talk page linking to my post at Talk:Year-round school in the United States (Talk:Year-round school in the United States#Recent edits. Thanks, Shearonink (talk) 04:23, 31 October 2019 (UTC)

(talk page watcher) Shearonink, I responded at the article Talk page. Mathglot (talk) 05:51, 1 November 2019 (UTC)

Contreras Lopez

Hi, can you help me cite I am having trouble please thank you — Preceding unsigned comment added by ContrerasLopez (talk • contribs) 00:56, 1 November 2019 (UTC)

Student moved page from mainspace to his sandbox

Hello, this popped up on my watchlist. Institutional Racism was moved from namespace to User:Nashun Overtons sandbox. Was this intentional? If not can it be moved back? Thanks! Jip Orlando (talk) 19:27, 1 November 2019 (UTC) Wasn't intentional but i need help undoing it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nashun Overton (talk • contribs) 19:29, 1 November 2019 (UTC)

I asked for it to be moved back at The administrators noticeboard. No worries. Jip Orlando (talk) 19:35, 1 November 2019 (UTC)
  • Thanks for letting me know, Jip Orlando! We do give instructions on how to copy a draft to their sandbox, but sometimes the students will get a little confused. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:41, 1 November 2019 (UTC)
Sure thing! It's been moved back by an admin. Thank you for your response. Best wishes, Jip Orlando (talk) 19:43, 1 November 2019 (UTC)

Census Data

Hi! I was looking at some census data and would like to include it as a table in my Wikipedia article. How can I do this without making it exploratory research? Also any tips on table making would be awesome. Thanks Joshua 22:06, 1 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from Blooming sunflower (talk)

Hello Shalor,

I moved my article out of sandbox and at the top in red is the message "This template should only be used in the username space."

Im not quite sure what this means.

Im also wondering if theres anything else in my article that needs to be edited.

Thank you in advance for your time,

Blooming Sunflower --Blooming sunflower (talk) 03:35, 3 November 2019 (UTC)

  • Hi! I'll post this on your talk page as well, but this template is just your sandbox template that marks it as a work in progress - to fix it all you need to do is remove it. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 05:15, 3 November 2019 (UTC)

Sandbox

I am not sure I am doing this correctly. First off I started my draft in the bibliography section but then I started another one in the sandbox. The one in sandbox is the one I am using. Is there anyway to make sure that I have done everything correctly?

Aesmith13 (talk) 20:10, 3 November 2019 (UTC)Ashley SmithAesmith13 (talk) 20:10, 3 November 2019 (UTC)

Request for Feedback

Hi User:Shalor (Wiki Ed)! I have been working on an article on the Transit App for Professor Reagle's Online Communities class. I am hoping that you would be able to take a look at my page and provide any feedback you may have, thank you so much! -MichelleBir. (talk) 20:38, 3 November 2019 (UTC)

Can do! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:54, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from T.thomas47 (talk)

Hello.

I need help with... I'm trying to add a 3rd reference to my reference list Arkansas.Gov and for some reason it's not letting me add that, so needing help to add that, please, and thank you



--T.thomas47 (talk) 19:12, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

T.thomas47, Can do - I just need the link! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:05, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from BLeverich (talk)

Hello.

I need help with editing my sandbox..I am still slightly confused how to edit it and create an article there for my assignment. I have completed my assignment on this page that was linked to our class but I'm unsure as how to put this in my sandbox???

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:BLeverich/Choose_an_Article&redirect=no&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_choose_article


--BLeverich (talk) 20:33, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

BLeverich, Will respond on your talk page! I just need some more info. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:18, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from Adam conlon (talk)

Hello.

I need help with...

Relative minimum wage is the ratio of the national median wage. This varies from country to country. A higher relative minimum wage means that there is a large gap between the minimum wage of that given area and the national median wage. This occurs in low income areas. The national U.S. national relative wage is about .36, which is the lowest out of any industrialized country. Recent studies have shown that there is evidence to suggest that minimum wage does not increase unemployment, which is contrary to the believe up until the 2000s. Recent studies show that the areas which have a higher national median wage are considered “high impact areas.” High impact meaning that these areas are at a higher risk for minimum wage policy to directly impact that community. In these high impact areas studies show that an increase in minimum wage increases employment, wages, and decreases poverty. These new studies help show how minimum wage can help reduce the gap in low income areas as well as increase the standard of living.[29] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Minimum_wage

--Adam conlon (talk) 15:09, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

Adam conlon, I'm not really sure of the issue. Can you elaborate? Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:04, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
(talk page watcher)} Adam conlon I looked only at your first sentence. You can’t have a ratio with only one value; a ratio requires two values. Mathglot (talk) 00:10, 5 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from Affan Musa (talk)

Hello.

I need help with... figuring out where to write and see my edits before posting them. I know that the talk page and the sandbox are both to be written on, but which is used for what exactly. --Affan Musa (talk) 03:41, 1 November 2019 (UTC)

(talk page watcher) Hi Affan Musa; I responded at your Talk page. Mathglot (talk) 04:58, 1 November 2019 (UTC)

The Holocaust

Hi Shalor, I see that a student has chosen the above as part of his course. That article is unlikely to be a good fit for student editing. All the best, SarahSV (talk) 23:44, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

Hi Shalor -- I came here to say exactly the same thing Sarah did. There are a lot of better choices; perhaps find an article that is underdeveloped, underreferenced, or otherwise needy? Dropping a new student into the middle of the Holocaust article is like dropping a student driver into the middle of London rush hour in a car with a stick shift. It's unlikely to be a good experience for a student editor. Thanks, Antandrus (talk) 00:15, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
(edit conflict) (lost my edit) Same thing; this is likely to be disruptive, and cause reverts and frustration on both sides. I was present and assisting Henia, a PhD Holocaust prof new editor at the article, but she just couldn’t get on board with WP verifiability and other policies and ended up indefinitely blocked. Mathglot (talk) 00:23, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
  • Thank you for letting me know!!! I'll reach out to the instructor and student right away! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:36, 6 November 2019 (UTC)

View Peer Review

Hi, I'm having trouble figuring out how to view what other people have peer reviewed on my article in my sandbox. I can figure out how to create a peer review for someone, but can't figure out how to see what someone has written on my article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Chiqueno (talk • contribs) 00:53, 5 November 2019 (UTC)

Saving Work in Sandbox

Hi, My name is Cambria and I am currently editing for my Anth 473 class. I am currently working on the Southern Tutchone wikipedia in my sandbox. I worked on one section and everything went well, however I am now working on a next section and I have been unable to save my work using the publish changes button. When I press the button the box to record what I have done does not pop up. I have tried a different server and the same thing happened. Could this be a problem with my sandbox?

Thank you, Cambria — Preceding unsigned comment added by CamJane (talk • contribs) 21:51, 6 November 2019 (UTC)

Didn't meant to join course

Hi Shalor! I knew you in Virginia! Now I am helping out in the American U law course, and I didn't mean to "join" the class but today I did. Now other edits of mine are showing up as classwork. May I withdraw from it somehow? https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/Econterms. Hope you are well. -- econterms (talk) 05:05, 7 November 2019 (UTC)

reviewing my page

Hi Shalor, Thank you for the previous help regarding the resources;I was able to fix them. Now I would like your help in giving me feed back on what I have wrote so far. No one has edited or reviewed any of my work. Also I have been trying for a week to peer review two of my fellow students web pages and I can not find any information. I can't tell if I am doing something wrong or they just have not done the work yet. How can I tell? This is so confusing.Kaw289 (talk) 00:11, 7 November 2019 (UTC)

Kaw289, Can do! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:12, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

About Using Sandbox

Hi Shalor! Thanks so much for getting back to me about my question (even though it was confusing) I went back and went through the wikipedia tutorials for editing your sandbox and played around with my sandbox a bit and figured out how to work through my issue! Thank you so much for your quick response and willingness to help! BLeverich (talk) 20:11, 7 November 2019 (UTC)

No problem! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:38, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

about citing my source

Hey, this is T.thomas47 and I asked about citing and editing a source and you told me to give you the link on your talk page. Here is the link www.Arkansas.gov, it is my 3rd source for editing my article Arkansas State University-Beebe, thanks, Tracy (--T.thomas47 (talk) 18:52, 7 November 2019 (UTC))

Responded on talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:45, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

Thanks so much for flagging the potential copyright issue!

Aloha, Just wanted to say thank you for your message and for looking out! I'll be sure to be super careful of that moving forward. Thanks again! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mahinat (talk • contribs) 08:17, 11 November 2019 (UTC)

  • No problem! It doesn't really feel like it would be an issue, but it's always something to keep in the back of your head. :) Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:16, 12 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from Mariela

Hello.

I need help with posting my sandbox on the live page, i have been trying but somehow it just glitches and stays on my sandbox, I have tried reseting my computer many times and I do not know if I am missing a step while summiting it but it just appears on my sandbox.



thank you so much. Mariela. --BeshitoLand (talk) 22:36, 8 November 2019 (UTC)

Will respond on talk page! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:02, 14 November 2019 (UTC)

Sandbox Review

Hi! Would you take some time and look over my sandbox User:Jmjosh90/sandbox I want to make sure that it is not too broad in scope and if it is, how to best integrate it into Rio Grande Valley while still completing the class assignment. Also if you can think of any similar projects that I can use for a reference that'd be awesome! Joshua 05:33, 8 November 2019 (UTC)

Will respond on talk page! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:03, 14 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from Emsandell (talk)

Hello.

I need help with review on this article! I would like to move it to the mainspace and need to do that before I am able to insert the cover art as well. Thanks so much! --Emsandell (talk) 20:06, 13 November 2019 (UTC)

I think I took care of moving the content from User:Emsandell/sandbox. -Reagle (talk) 21:07, 13 November 2019 (UTC)
Reagle, Thanks! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:37, 14 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from T.thomas47 (talk)

T.thomas47 (talk) 03:34, 13 November 2019 (UTC)

Hello.

I need help with...you said my Wikipedia article still need work and you could help me with it, yes please, can you help me, thanks



--T.thomas47 (talk) 03:34, 13 November 2019 (UTC)

Will respond on talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:00, 14 November 2019 (UTC)

draft editing

Hello Shalor, I am one of the student editors and I have some quick questions: should I first put my works in sandbox then move them into the live article or can I edit it directly? And where can I leave the edit summary? Because I just finished editing some information and don't know whether I should publish the change or not. Thank you so much. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Infinitygwen (talk • contribs) 06:10, 14 November 2019 (UTC)

editing

Hi Shalor,

Thank you for your response! And could you please check my editing? I am not able to publish changes because something is wrong with it. What does it mean "it contains a new external link to a site registered on Wikipedia's blacklist" and what should I do?

Thank you so much, Infinitygwen — Preceding unsigned comment added by Infinitygwen (talk • contribs) 01:57, 15 November 2019 (UTC)

T.thomas47

Hey, thanks for helping me, here in order the citations you said are unsourced and need citations: 1st-source 2,2nd-source 2, 3rd-source 2, 4th- source 2, 5th- source 2, 6th- source 1 and 7th-source 1. Also, the paragraph before my actual adding content to the article about why I chose that article, I can't find because my teacher needs to be able to see that in my sandbox for a grade, thanks T.thomas47 (talk) 15:16, 15 November 2019 (UTC)

Will respond on talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 10:19, 20 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from T.thomas47 (talk)

Hello.

I need help with...I'm trying to move my article page to the mainspace and I'm not sure if I did it right, can you please check and help me, thank you, T.thomas47 (talk) 15:35, 16 November 2019 (UTC)



--T.thomas47 (talk) 15:35, 16 November 2019 (UTC)

Moved! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 10:33, 20 November 2019 (UTC)

Frankiecc

Hi Shalor, thank you for your feedback, I'm certain that I have done the citations for my article incorrectly. I don't know how to reuse the citation and change the page number without changing all the previous citations to the updated page number, can you tell me how to do that? Obviously what I have created cannot be posted as is with incorrect citations. Thank you Frankiecc (talk) 00:35, 16 November 2019 (UTC)

Will respond on talk page! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 10:38, 20 November 2019 (UTC)

Request for an article review

Hello! I hope you are doing well! I am currently working on editing the Arpilleras page and I was hoping you could give me some feedback? Thank you for your time and consideration!

Gb825 (talk) 15:07, 18 November 2019 (UTC)

speedily deletion flag

Hi Shalor, I just received a speedily deletion flag on my sandbox, and I'm very confused!! It says that someone thinks I'm using this page for promotion, but I am only here to add historical information to Luisa Tetrazzini's page for a class. I am NOT using this information for advertising or promotion whatsoever. I honestly have no idea what I've done wrong. The user who flagged me mentioned that I can press a button to contest the flag, but I can't find it anywhere. I'm feeling very worried. If there is something I'm doing wrong, I'm happy to edit or delete whatever that might be, but I couldn't see anything specific that was supposed to be changed based on this other user's flag. If you can shed any light on this, I will be so grateful. I believe it's my sandbox page that has been flagged (but I'm very new at all this, so I'm not totally sure). Here is the link User:Skyesings/Luisa Tetrazzini Please let me know if you need any other info to understand the problem! Thank you, Skye.Skyesings (talk) 19:54, 18 November 2019 (UTC)

(by talk reader) @Skyesings: A few things went wrong here. First, your sandbox is a copy of Luisa Tetrazzini; I'm not sure why you did that, especially without attribution as required by WP:CWW. Second, the article you copied is poorly written, using adjectives like sensational, extraordinary, phenomenal which sounds like the sort of thing a modern publicist would write about a client. Third, XXX8906 noticed you (a new editor, always suspect) and tagged your sandbox for these reasons but reverted themselves, realizing what happened. Your sandbox is, for now, safe. In the future, please make edits directly to the article in piecemeal fashion. A late term wholesale re-write would be unwelcome. Chris Troutman (talk) 20:05, 18 November 2019 (UTC)
Hi Chris! Thank you so much for the quick feedback!! I'm very new to all this and thought I was supposed to use the sandbox as just a draft to keep everything. When I've made official edits to the actual published article, I only copy a few sentences of my edits at a time, rather than just doing one large edit. I mistakenly copied the whole article so I could keep track of how I was changing it, and I forgot to delete before I published the last time. I will make sure and take care of that asap. Also, thank you for your contact about the wording. I believe it is difficult to clearly articulate how truly famous and incredible she was (according to many critical reviews) without using some of those words which could cause the article to be marked for promotion. I will think about how to reword those more neutrally. And to clarify, will the deletion tag be taken off, or is there something more that I should do? Thank you again for your helpful feedback!! Skyesings (talk) 20:18, 18 November 2019 (UTC)
No problem, Skyesings. Nothing you created is tagged for deletion. Messages left on your talk page stay there, even if the matter was resolved. As for wording, if a source says she was "phenomenal" then specify that the source said so. We cannot describe someone as phenomenal in Wikipedia's voice. We communicate descriptions of the subject through attributing the source of the claims. Please read WP:PEACOCK and WP:WEASEL. Chris Troutman (talk) 20:26, 18 November 2019 (UTC)

You are a lifesaver!! Those pages are so helpful and give some great examples. I will make sure and keep that in mind as I continue to edit the article. Thank you again for taking time to help me!!Skyesings (talk) 20:31, 18 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from Mdszamrej (talk)

Hello.

I need help with... my sandbox and making edits to the assignment. There was an easy way to get to the sandbox in the beginning in the top right I could hit start editing and then make my changes and edits and then publish it at the end. Im trying to find this same page where I made my previous edits. As the only sandbox edit page that I find has all the information and I can edit it, but also isn't as clear and has random /'s and information about it.

Its kind of setup how this page here is set up, I want the basic sandbox or explained how I get there to make edits to the new page.


--Mdszamrej (talk) 02:32, 19 November 2019 (UTC)

Will respond on talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:37, 20 November 2019 (UTC)

Wikipedia:Wiki Ed/Valdosta State University/Mixture and Miscegenation (Fall 2019)

Hi Shalor. I stumbled across Of One Blood (novel) awhile back while checking on some non-free content use. I did some minor cleanup, etc., but didn't realize that it was something that was being worked on by students as part of a Wiki Ed course. Anyway, I think the course's instructor (Uncannydazzler) might be better off giving specific instructions to his class either outside of Wikipedia or perhaps on their user talk pages, or at least try and realize that article talk pages are for everyone not just his class. It's not clear in some cases who he's addressing in his article talk page comments and some of the comments look to be being a bit haphazardly added to existing talk page discussions. While I understand that he's probably set deadlines for his students to meet regarding the various articles they're working on improving, none of those deadlines are applicable to Wikipedia; I'm also not quite sure whether he realizes that WP:OWN applies to all articles (technically all pages, but it's mainly becomes an issue with respect to articles). So, if he's going to be grading his students' Wikipedia work, he might be better of having them do stuff off of Wikipedia, grading it, and then having them add to articles. -- Marchjuly (talk) 22:04, 19 November 2019 (UTC)

Thanks, (Marchjuly). I was trying to send some comments to my students this morning and did not even realize I was in the main article talk page--that was meant for their sandbox pages within the Wiki Edu platform. I will remove and place those comments where they belong. Just a mistake on my part. --Uncannydazzler (talk) 22:09, 19 November 2019 (UTC)
@Uncannydazzler: That’s OK and thanks for clarifying things. If you do go back and remove or edit any of your posts, please keep in mind WP:TPO and WP:REDACT. — Marchjuly (talk) 22:46, 19 November 2019 (UTC)

I need help with the Background

Hey Shalor, I added some more information in the beginning of the background of my groups article called "Men Own the Fields, Women Own the Crops" by Miriam Goheen. Do you mind taking a look to see what I wrote looks good? I will give you a link to where I found my added information. Also, how do I make a citation at the bottom of the page? Thank you! :)


https://search.proquest.com/docview/303304783?accountid=11226 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ddavis167 (talk • contribs) 20:53, November 19, 2019 (UTC)

rude moderators

I am really not appreciating the feedback some of the editors are snarky. I don't need that kind of feedback its disrespectful and rude. I get it as a man he has the power but he could be cordial and professional about not snarky and rude. Thank you.— Preceding unsigned comment added by DiaEdie (talk • contribs) 11:38, 21 November 2019 (UTC)‎

(talk page watcher) Hi DiaEdie. I've responded to your post at Talk:Sex industry/Archives/2019#Giving feedback. Please try and assume good faith when it comes to other editors and not immediately assume that someone who is offering you what appears to be constructive criticism or expressing concerns about some of your edits is doing so for reasons other than trying to help improve the quality of Wikipedia. There are no real "moderators" when it comes to Wikipedia (there are administrators but they serve a slightly different purpose) and whether an editor is male or female matters not when it comes to quality of one's edits. -- Marchjuly (talk) 04:56, 21 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from Suprabheballary

Hello.

I need help with understanding if my wikipedia page is ready to be published and the steps to publish it?



--Suprabheballary 05:03, 21 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from AWimbishFall2019 (talk)

Hello.

I need help with...

Making this entry less one sided and more objective


--AWimbishFall2019 (talk) 15:58, 21 November 2019 (UTC)

Thank you!

Hi Shalor, I just wanted to say thank you for all your help with the questions I had in my WikiEdu course. I think I finally got my article where I want it to be. Couldn't have done it without you. :) Have a good one! -MorganAtMGA (talk) 02:54, 25 November 2019 (UTC)

Wikipedia Project Northern Kentucky University

Hello, my name is Fatoumata Sow and I am currently a student at Northern Kentucky University. For my class project, I added a paragraph to the Wikipedia article entitled "Haitian Mythology" and I would love to receive feedback because it is part of the assignment. Help me with any comments you have about the article or ways to improve the paragraph please.


Here is the link to it: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haitian_mythology The title of my paragraph is: History and Origins of Voodooism in Haiti

Thank you, — Preceding unsigned comment added by Timsha54 (talk • contribs) 02:18, November 24, 2019 (UTC)

(talk page watcher) Responded at your Talk page. Mathglot (talk) 09:24, 24 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from Danielmharris (talk)

Hello.

Whenever I click on my sandbox, all it says is "this is the sandbox of User Danielmharris's user page. There is no where for me to edit anything, write anything, or work on anything. So, with the article I've been writing, I've just already published it (even though it is still very preliminary) and am just editing it when I need to add something. In addition to not having a functioning sandbox, when I titled my article, I created a title and for some reason it included User:Danielmharris at the beginning of my title, and no matter how hard I try to figure it out, I cannot seem to change the title of my article. I even went to the Wikipedia page about moving an article, and the screenshot that is listed on the page of where the move button is does not help me because on my page, there is no move button at that exact spot. There is no move button anywhere, really, so I cannot rename my article.



--Danielmharris (talk) 15:59, 24 November 2019 (UTC) Daniel Harris

Feedback on Edits MadeTuh18327 (talk) 04:11, 25 November 2019 (UTC)

Hello Shalor, I would like to ask if I'd be able to receive any feedback or just a general check on the edits I made on Daniel Miller's Wikipedia page? I would love to get advice from you before I officially submit my work. Thank you so much!

Need help request from Aesmith13 (talk) username:aesmith13

Hello.

I need help with... I am not seeing how to submit my article to Wikipedia? Also I tried moving my article to change my article name and it did not do what I thought it would do so I tried to convert it back. Could you make sure I have done that correctly, and possibly walk me though the process of submission? I believe I have corrected all of your suggestions, and thank you so much for taking the time to do that for me, I greatly appreciate it.



--Aesmith13 (talk) 05:42, 25 November 2019 (UTC)

Class

Hey Shaylor, I was wondering if you could please work with the students in this class as I've done a fair amount of clean up behind them. Many of these articles would have been deleted as promotional/copyright violations as they're basically just resumes and a quote farm, take this for example.Praxidicae (talk) 15:42, 26 November 2019 (UTC)

  • Just finished up with the student's message - I'll definitely check the rest of the class as well! Thank you so much for letting me know, Praxidicae! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:06, 26 November 2019 (UTC)

Thank you for Feedback!

Thank you so much, Shalor. I appreciate the feedback! It helped me a lot. Tuh18327 (talk) 22:26, 25 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from Mommyoftwokings (talk)

Hello.

I need help with... im trying to move my work to main space but its not allowing me. also the more icon inst showing up can you please assists thank you



--Mommyoftwokings (talk) 01:36, 26 November 2019 (UTC)

(talk page watcher)Hi Mommyoftwokings. Was this the edit you were trying to make? That was content you added to Depression in childhood and adolescence, but I've removed it for now because it's not quite ready (at least in my opinion) to be added to the article. Some of it seemed a bit redundant to what's already covered in that particular section and some of it had a kind of original research feel to it and not a very encyclopedic tone to it. In additions, the sources you were trying to cite also weren't really formatted properly, at least not how they should be for a Wikipedia article. Perhaps you can work on some of these things and then re-add it. Most of the time articles are just corrected as by anyone who comes along, but since you're a student and this appears to be part of your class project, I thought you might want to try and do so first. -- Marchjuly (talk) 02:58, 26 November 2019 (UTC)
Thank you Marchjuly! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:07, 26 November 2019 (UTC)

Look at my sandbox

Hi, I went and copied some things that I had added. Even though some of it got reverted will this go towards my 25 edits? Or should I start over. My stuff got changed because I was not able to follow proper guidelines can you let me know if I am correct on this thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by DiaEdie (talk • contribs) 06:18, November 26, 2019 (UTC)

I just added a sentence to explain where prostitution is illegal in the United States. I also wanted some clarity I was told not to sign my submissions or questions but on here it says don't forget to sign. I am confused as I was told several times not to do that but it is stated on the talk section one must do so. Please and thank you.


So I feel like I am getting conflicting information. I was told not to sign my signature which I stopped doing in articles and on my talk my page. I was also told not not to start a new topic to continue from the old topic which I did. I also don't have any bias about the United States but it looks like that. I have tried several times to add information from a global view point only for it to get removed. .These editors love putting me in my place How am I am being bias when they delete anything I submit. I tried adding things about the Dominican Republic and Colombia and was told I was too specific and when I start using the the United States because that is what is our database I am accused of having bias. I can't win on here nor do I want to. (DiaEdie (talk) 16:39, 26 November 2019 (UTC)).

  • I'll respond on your talk page. (Also combining the posts here.) Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:38, 26 November 2019 (UTC)

Changes to the Soumaya Keynes Page

Shalor,

Thank you for your feedback on the Soumaya Keynes page, and for your help in editing the "family" section of the document. I found your feedback to be quite helpful. I just want to make sure I understand your first point. Should I simply delete both the "Other Activities" and "Talks and Interviews" sections of the page and incorporate any of the important details from them into the "career" section?

Thanks again for the help. Much appreciated. Beavinlake (talk) 20:06, 26 November 2019 (UTC)

  • That would be my recommendation. And no problem! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:40, 26 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from Kayyem (talk)

Hello.

I need help with wikipedia assignment for social psychology class. I'm wondering if the information in my sandbox is acceptable. Also, i'm wondering when can the information in my sandbox be posted and become a piece of an actual article on wikipedia. I would like the information to be critiqued. Also, how do I CORRECTLY add sources/ references to my article? --Kayyem (talk) 03:36, 26 November 2019 (UTC)

  • Hi! Ian is actually the Wikipedia Expert for your class, but I'll take a quick look at your work as well. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:43, 26 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from Dhruvi

Hello.

I am writing my wiki page on Matilde Bombardini as part of my class assignment. I am having trouble moving my sandbox to an actual wiki creation page. Please help me with this. My deadline is 26th August, 11:59 PM.



--Dhruvi 04:29, 27 November 2019 (UTC)

Can't move Soumaya Keynes article

Shalor,

I am attempting to move my article but am receiving the error message "Article cannot be moved: A page of that name already exists, or the name you have chosen is not valid."

I selected (Article) and named it "Soumaya Keynes"

The page Soumaya Keynes does exist but only redirects to the Keynes family page. How do I post mine?

Thank you for your help.

Beavinlake (talk) 06:42, 27 November 2019 (UTC)

(talk page watcher)Hi Beavinlake. Before you move the content in your sandbox, you might want to take a look at MOS:SECTIONCAPS, MOS:DATEFORMAT (inculding WP:BADDATE and MOS:DATEUNIFY), MOS:ALLCAPS, WP:CITELEAD, and H:FOOT#Reference lists: the basics (probably the most important of the lot). Most of these are minor formatting or WP:MOS mistakes that aren't the kind of things that would lead to the article being deleted, but they are things you can easily fix yourself. You might also want to look at WP:CATV and WP:NAMESORT since you don't seem to be intending to submit your draft for review to Wikipedia:Articles for creation (categories and sorting are things an AfC reviewer normally does after approving a draft).
As for actually moving the page, you should ask an administrator to do it for you at Wikipedia:Requested moves; there are various ways you could try and do it yourself, but most of them end up causing problems due to split page histories. An administrator will be able to delete the redirect page and do all the necessary cleanup before moving the sandbox to the new title. Note that just because an administrator moves the page, that doesn't mean that the administrator is approving the article per se; it's just means they are taking care of the technical stuff involved in the move. Once the content is added to the mainspace, it will be fair game for anyone to edit at anytime as explained in Wikipedia:Ownership of content. So, if you want to ensure that a particular version of your work is what your teacher is going to see, you may want wait until they look it over before requesting it be moved to the mainspace. -- Marchjuly (talk) 07:35, 27 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from InduniWickramasinghe (talk)

Hello.

I need help with finalizing and publishing this article. Thank you!



--InduniWickramasinghe (talk) 07:48, 27 November 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for the feed bacK

I wondering if I should change my article that you as you have suggested early? Thanks! I was think police abuse of sex works in the United States. I think I can do the 25 edits let me what is perfer(DiaEdie (talk) 18:41, 27 November 2019 (UTC))

tweaking pages

Are you suggesting I switch articles or continue working on the same one and have you help me thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by DiaEdie (talk • contribs) 21:06, 27 November 2019 (UTC)

I started on new article police abuse of sex workers in the United States. I added two citations. (DiaEdie (talk) 00:29, 28 November 2019 (UTC))

I started my edits I am hoping to have this finish by tonight so I can post it Friday on my cavans but I need your support in placement and other stuff that I may need to do. Thank you for your patience. — Preceding unsigned comment added by DiaEdie (talk • contribs) 20:37, 28 November 2019 (UTC)

article you reviewed

Hi thank you so much I am hoping to have this finish by sunday or monday once I am done can you check it for me again. Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by DiaEdie (talk • contribs) 19:47, 29 November 2019 (UTC)

State Government Image lcopyrights

Are images published by state governments in the public domain? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gesanes (talk • contribs) 16:01, 30 November 2019 (UTC)

(talk page watcher) Hi Gesanes. Assuming that you're referring to a US state government, the answer is most likely no as explained in Wikipedia:Public domain#US government works and c:Commons:Licensing#Material in the public domain. Works created by US government employees as part of their official duties are generally considered to be within the public domain, but the same is not always true for employees working for states, counties, cities, etc; in that case, things depend on the laws of the state, country, city, etc. Some states such as Florida and California have passed statutes which state that works by their employees is considered to be within the public domain for certain state departments and for certain content, etc., but not for others. You can probably find out more about the copyright laws of a particular state here. It's to also understand that not all content hosted by US government or US state government websites, etc. is not necessarily content created by an official government website. Such websites also sometimes host content created by third-parties, either per the concept of fair use or some agreement between the two sides; so, for such content, it would not be considered to be within the public domain simply as an official government work. It might be public domain for some other reason, but that's something which will need to be assessed separately. You didn't identify the state or image you're interested in knowing more about, but you can probably get some more specific advice about both at Wikipedia:Media copyright questions or c:Commons:Village pump/Copyright. -- Marchjuly (talk) 23:19, 30 November 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from Bbarr43 (talk)

Hello.

I need help with...

I wrote an article and submitted it, but im unsure if it went through for review.



--Bbarr43 (talk) 01:44, 1 December 2019 (UTC)

Need help request from Lavendersara (talk)

Hello.

I need help with... I am unable to save edits I make in my sandbox. Every time I click "Publish changes" nothing happens. I would appreciate any help you can give me, thanks!


--Lavendersara (talk) 18:51, 1 December 2019 (UTC)

I'll respond on your talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:54, 2 December 2019 (UTC)

Finishing up

Hi I am going to be finishing at 430Pm would you go over it for me? So that I can present it on Cavanas thank you.(DiaEdie (talk) 21:29, 1 December 2019 (UTC)).

Need help request from Femachisma (talk)

Hello.

I need help with... 

transferring my article to the main space


--Femachisma (talk) 15:52, 2 December 2019 (UTC)

looking over content

Ok thank you I will go over it one more time to catch any plagiarism and make sure its in my words before I submit it again I would like a final edit to make sure I have corrected my mistakes thanks again for your support. (DiaEdie (talk) 17:07, 2 December 2019 (UTC)).

looking over content

Hi can you look over my two last entries thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by DiaEdie (talk • contribs) 18:03, 2 December 2019 (UTC)

Help request

Hello Shalor. Im currently editing the india and the world bank page and want to add a section about healthcare funding. I currently have my type up in my sandbox and was hoping you could review it to make sure it was free of any bias error or any other issues that a trained wiki-eye might have before i publish it to the actual india wb page. Thank you for the help Forsterucsd (talk) 10:10, 2 December 2019 (UTC)

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